(this is a poem created from the words in the wordle bank from this week's RWP prompt #114 "get your poem on" and they were some difficult words to work with, but I still enjoyed the challenge. Thanks Deb!)
Lying in the dark listening to nothing
Except the patter of the little girl's footsteps who lives next door
The muttered voices of happiness from her parents
"You're such a beautiful little girl" (you say to yourself)
When you realize you are freezing
And look for your blanket
But you can't find it in the darkness
Sit up and turn on the light
Damn it is much too cold in here
You look at the window and see it has frosted from the cold
Since you have returned you feel as if you walk on eggshells
With the people closest to you
You always seem to panic when you meet someone new
There was that lubricious boyfriend you left two years ago
Who is only looking for one thing to keep his prick wet and warm
Some realtionships just wither and decay
It is not your problem anymore
Get up and walk to the end of the bed and open your footlocker
You brought that back with you
From that far away land
The security at the airport wanted to cut it open with a hacksaw
But you said "No" and they listened
You find a book of fiction and place it on your lap
It contains short stories of pirates and legends out on the sea
You contemplate dying your hair red tomorrow
Auburn red is a beautiful and sexy colour
Something to attract a good man
As you look up you see a crucifix
The only thing hanging on your wall
As you admire this man with a crown of thorns and nails in his hands and feet
How he must have suffered for what he believed in
What a sorrowful story as you remember it
You decide to try and go back to sleep
Tomorrow you will start the book
As the pitter pat of the little feet send you back to dream land
So you can be safe with dreams of frogs and fairy princesses
Or maybe of loons that look like plump geese with seagull wings
flying high above the land looking for clear lakes to live
Anything that takes you away
From this world that is so full of anguish and pain
Red Wolf Journal Spring 2014, and a fresh start
10 years ago
It is good to escape. Excellently done.
ReplyDeleteAre you contemplating red hair or is this simply the narrator of your poem. Enjoyed the night time journey - reminds me I need sleep!
ReplyDeleteI like the insomniac's variety of thoughts - well done!
ReplyDeleteAnthony as always it is an honor to hear from you. I am glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteJulie no I am not going to dye my hair red. I did that about 20 years ago, had it done professionally, cost me loads of money and my natural blonde hair starting coming back in about two weeks. It is my narrator and I am happy you enjoyed it. Now get some sleep.
ReplyDeleteZuoxzoux I am glad you liked the insomniac's variety of thoughts. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed it, took me right into the room and felt the story unfold...
ReplyDeleteThe solitary man on the wall reminded me, as he did you, to remain committed. Nice touch in this very busy night. After all, it's hard enough just to bend down to the foot of the bed to pull up the covers when you're cold. Love the energy here.
ReplyDeletemotherveg thanks so much for stopping by and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteAllan as always I appreciate your comments. I am glad you loved it.
ReplyDeleteLoved the last 4 lines (the rest of the poem was good, too,) but it took everything & put it together.
ReplyDeleteAfter I posted the poem I went back to bed & back to sleep. But there were still a bunch of poems ahead of mine!
I like this. I've had uneasy (and sleepless nights) like what you describe in this piece. In this whole piece I see juxtapositions between the man on the cross and the salacious boyfriend, her impending fairytale dreams and the much colder reality. Good work this week.
ReplyDeleteMarianV,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting.
Pamela
Nicole thanks so much for your kind comments. I love your work and it is a real honor for me to have you like my work.
ReplyDeletePamela
Midnight's hardly late for me, so posting early's easy. I can also identify with you character's range of distraction. Especially the begin the book tomorrow idea.
ReplyDeleteWoe and alas! For I too am distracted and feelingly feel the pangs.
ReplyDeleteWell Barbara midnight is very late for me since my first class starts at 7 a.m. But I really appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Thanks
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Percy for stopping by.
ReplyDeletePamela
You capture the tormented back and forth of sleepless nights (I know them well) with compelling images. I particularly like this line: "You contemplate dying your hair red tomorrow." I love that frogs also make an appearance in your poem.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth,
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for commenting and stopping by. I have also been knwon to suffer from insomnia. How I hate that.
Pamela
Some of us live in a different hemisphere.I am living in your future.. I will always be tomorrow for you(could be a poem)
ReplyDeleteLove your thought processes especially
trying to get a footlocker through customs..made me laugh...I know you have done something like this...I have!Enjoyed this.By the way if you want to attract a good
man (or any man) go for blonde!:))
Rallentaanda,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting. And I have done something like that at the customs counter before, lol. I am glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate your comments. And by the way I am a blondie;)Well now I do have some grey hair. I went red about 20 years ago, but my natural blonde came back in about two weeks.
Pamela
I love this...the details of so many things...things...how the night can seem to go on forever...would love to run into one of your loons, such dreams to take us away
ReplyDeleteOfheart,
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by.
Pamela
Sometimes an escape is the only thing left - after dying one's hair, of course. Love this piece!
ReplyDeletenicely done Pam....footlocker through customs about as easy as extra Havana rum through the customs...cheers
ReplyDeleteSusan,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by and commenting. I am glad you loved it.
Pamela
Wayne,
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting. Those people in customs can be very special indeed. What's wrong with extra Havana rum???? Cheers to you.
Pamela