tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post9095925705805507425..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Swimming on linoleum POW prompt #6 a centoUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19246620916361609622010-06-09T18:37:44.095-05:002010-06-09T18:37:44.095-05:00Ahh francis you are too kind!
I loved yours it mad...Ahh francis you are too kind!<br />I loved yours it made me laugh<br />(about those flabby knees!)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78399515743223297202010-06-09T18:29:59.316-05:002010-06-09T18:29:59.316-05:00Another fabulous cento as I make my rounds. I part...Another fabulous cento as I make my rounds. I particularly like the final stanza, but there are some great combinations throughout.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38665216225110291302010-06-09T17:53:05.283-05:002010-06-09T17:53:05.283-05:00Thanks Linda I enjoyed this and I cannot remove th...Thanks Linda I enjoyed this and I cannot remove them without removing all comments for some reason :)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70680757357529719122010-06-09T16:50:37.584-05:002010-06-09T16:50:37.584-05:00LOL - had to laugh at Marianne's comments and ...LOL - had to laugh at Marianne's comments and the 'round and 'round gaff...should leave that up, Pamela! Love this...you did a great job blending Bukowski with Shakespeare!Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78602047450395096702010-06-09T10:21:21.447-05:002010-06-09T10:21:21.447-05:00Derrick
Thanks for commenting! I enjoyed doing thi...Derrick<br />Thanks for commenting! I enjoyed doing this prompt!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69434001472143853932010-06-09T10:19:08.627-05:002010-06-09T10:19:08.627-05:00Stan thanks for stopping over!
PamelaStan thanks for stopping over!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8745890654511801802010-06-09T10:18:36.908-05:002010-06-09T10:18:36.908-05:00Thanks Rall this was enjoyable!
And when I tried t...Thanks Rall this was enjoyable!<br />And when I tried to delete some of Marianne's comments it ended up deleting all of them!So I just left them be. <br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5507388715049374692010-06-09T07:03:14.591-05:002010-06-09T07:03:14.591-05:00It ought to be difficult to blend Will and Buk but...It ought to be difficult to blend Will and Buk but although some lines do shine out, you and others have made it look easy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41866984580413046592010-06-09T06:01:01.615-05:002010-06-09T06:01:01.615-05:00I can just about make out the Shakespeare by the f...I can just about make out the Shakespeare by the form, but you stitched it together with Bukowski quite subtly.<br />I'll try to post this comment in one hit :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80345096606205903132010-06-09T05:57:51.672-05:002010-06-09T05:57:51.672-05:00Well done Pamela. I think poor Marianne is sufferi...Well done Pamela. I think poor Marianne is suffering from cento syndrome going round and round like the goldfish!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-47352204910537571422010-06-07T17:48:43.301-05:002010-06-07T17:48:43.301-05:00Shraddha
This form is a cento and taken from lines...Shraddha<br />This form is a cento and taken from lines of those poems<br />Thanks!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28470967242169951062010-06-07T17:47:25.546-05:002010-06-07T17:47:25.546-05:00Thanks Marianne and there does seem to be a proble...Thanks Marianne and there does seem to be a problem with your blogger oops!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37604738114856368102010-06-07T16:54:52.728-05:002010-06-07T16:54:52.728-05:00Um, 7 comments, all from me? Yikes, I am sorry. Bl...Um, 7 comments, all from me? Yikes, I am sorry. Blogger was down here (there too?) and nothing worked properly. I've had a wonderful time reading Bukowski. And I do like the way you have blended the lines from Shakespeare with Bukowski's work.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62141920559113227012010-06-07T14:48:26.587-05:002010-06-07T14:48:26.587-05:00Forgot to mention, I love the title!Forgot to mention, I love the title!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.com