tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post8576969768600263945..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: My heart is in my hands (writer's island #2 stowaway)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83423385316833531802010-05-11T16:32:29.147-05:002010-05-11T16:32:29.147-05:00Thanks Barb. Little spiders definitely have their ...Thanks Barb. Little spiders definitely have their place in the world.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16379837590815326282010-05-11T15:54:06.238-05:002010-05-11T15:54:06.238-05:00Great movement through this one. You do well with ...Great movement through this one. You do well with morning haze.<br /><br />The "swing high, float, filament" section makes me think of tiny spiders on the wind, discovering the world. (for me a good thing, I think little spiders are neat)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63592456426500056042010-05-10T10:24:42.529-05:002010-05-10T10:24:42.529-05:00Thanks Julie.
PamelaThanks Julie.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63341550165662528122010-05-10T10:00:40.151-05:002010-05-10T10:00:40.151-05:00the combination of image and poem is especially st...the combination of image and poem is especially stirring. Wow.Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35292729796279046792010-05-10T09:55:59.873-05:002010-05-10T09:55:59.873-05:00Mark,
Thanks for commenting. Nice to see you.
Pame...Mark,<br />Thanks for commenting. Nice to see you.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82476139761853076112010-05-09T21:33:12.115-05:002010-05-09T21:33:12.115-05:00I love the rhythm and I can feel the tiredness in ...I love the rhythm and I can feel the tiredness in this. I could feel the gravity in your words, like water revolving in a funnel. Well done, Pamela!<br /><br />~Markmarkooliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08274475767714546790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58789824427539538722010-05-09T12:11:29.804-05:002010-05-09T12:11:29.804-05:00Thanks my friend. Hope you are having a wonderful ...Thanks my friend. Hope you are having a wonderful Sunday afternoon. Cheers to you from the land of volcanoes.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46951130564358773122010-05-09T11:56:03.132-05:002010-05-09T11:56:03.132-05:00hello Pam..hazy over a morning coffee is a good wa...hello Pam..hazy over a morning coffee is a good way to start the day....and a wonderful poem....first line grabbed me ....and took me to a nice ending also....I reallly like this...cheers from the mountainsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70625664173058900052010-05-09T11:35:04.671-05:002010-05-09T11:35:04.671-05:00Linda,
Thanks so much.
PamelaLinda,<br />Thanks so much.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25808263403019227062010-05-09T11:33:20.360-05:002010-05-09T11:33:20.360-05:00Dee,
Thanks for the comment.
PamelaDee,<br />Thanks for the comment.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67185083916994758842010-05-09T11:32:46.991-05:002010-05-09T11:32:46.991-05:00Uma,
Thanks and I loved your poem.
PamelaUma,<br />Thanks and I loved your poem.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24445438011382495942010-05-09T11:32:09.968-05:002010-05-09T11:32:09.968-05:00Thanks Paul I enjoyed yours as well.
PamelaThanks Paul I enjoyed yours as well.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26667680344144520312010-05-09T11:31:26.598-05:002010-05-09T11:31:26.598-05:00Marja,
Thanks for that appreciate it.
PamelaMarja,<br />Thanks for that appreciate it.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12558797890478956102010-05-09T08:27:40.588-05:002010-05-09T08:27:40.588-05:00mmm...I see this poem as a playful hide and seek, ...mmm...I see this poem as a playful hide and seek, toying with capture...at some point...Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-804183196320928172010-05-09T08:07:52.947-05:002010-05-09T08:07:52.947-05:00this is gorgeous - the rhythm pulls you along to t...this is gorgeous - the rhythm pulls you along to the end like that miniscule filament!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10852291481349046992010-05-09T06:13:34.939-05:002010-05-09T06:13:34.939-05:00Pamela, this is beautiful, words used so carefully...Pamela, this is beautiful, words used so carefully carrying a depth of meaning.Umahttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19496697193529250702010-05-09T02:03:17.852-05:002010-05-09T02:03:17.852-05:00I like the way the stowaway is psychic leftovers o...I like the way the stowaway is psychic leftovers of another time. Nice!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88340138151938031782010-05-09T01:49:17.069-05:002010-05-09T01:49:17.069-05:00Transcends through a miniscule filament
very beaut...Transcends through a miniscule filament<br />very beautiful <br />Love the rythmMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54061175711751846782010-05-08T23:10:26.998-05:002010-05-08T23:10:26.998-05:00Stan,
Thanks for that and noticing.
PamealStan,<br />Thanks for that and noticing.<br />Pamealflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27084216315965158822010-05-08T21:53:49.986-05:002010-05-08T21:53:49.986-05:00I like the suggestion of repetition, while acknowl...I like the suggestion of repetition, while acknowledgeing the course will, eventually, be run.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36994310639022892682010-05-08T16:17:37.980-05:002010-05-08T16:17:37.980-05:00Thanks Anthony for saying so.
PamelaThanks Anthony for saying so.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60890696980477573182010-05-08T16:14:32.178-05:002010-05-08T16:14:32.178-05:00This one is so deep and wise. And I agree, it flow...This one is so deep and wise. And I agree, it flows beautifully.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29948548986489338822010-05-08T10:48:13.480-05:002010-05-08T10:48:13.480-05:00Brenda,
Thanks I wrote this in a bit of a haze ove...Brenda,<br />Thanks I wrote this in a bit of a haze over my morning coffee.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62606256513209873392010-05-08T10:38:34.386-05:002010-05-08T10:38:34.386-05:00Pamela, I found myself going back to the beginning...Pamela, I found myself going back to the beginning and reading it through over and over again. Something about the rhythm draws me to it. I especially like "Revolving brings it to the beginning."brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com