tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post756223309990767454..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: swimming with my sister we write poems #29 swimmingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6469224709554184372010-11-25T10:00:43.456-06:002010-11-25T10:00:43.456-06:00ms pie,
Thanks and I agree we can usually mend th...ms pie, <br />Thanks and I agree we can usually mend those bridges when we are family. However my sister is <br />very stubborn and it seems I will have to give in first. I love reading your poetry.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88784374238012091392010-11-24T22:38:09.861-06:002010-11-24T22:38:09.861-06:00hmmm glad i read the comments... i have four siste...hmmm glad i read the comments... i have four sisters so i understand a tiny wittle bit.. i love my sisters so much but we always don't see eye to eye and at one time i didn't speak to one of my sisters for two years... well, she wouldn't speak to me... i was heartbroken... and decided i would do anything to cross that bridge to her... i love yr descriptions... drowning in lava, now that's an incredible image.. stuck in the beautiful blue.. sometimes bridges can't be mended but i'm on the upside of yes they can... thank you for sharing pamela i so loved reading it and yr comments... as always thank you for visiting and yr kind comments...ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/11/24/surround-submerge/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88373018371965163562010-11-24T20:09:22.114-06:002010-11-24T20:09:22.114-06:00Thanks for that Mary. Our relationship has its ups...Thanks for that Mary. Our relationship has its ups and downs. Right now we are on the downside.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67412725552707406522010-11-24T19:58:25.485-06:002010-11-24T19:58:25.485-06:00Sorry there is tension between you and your sister...Sorry there is tension between you and your sister, Pamela. But out of it came a very good poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-42302980060840967892010-11-24T12:02:43.267-06:002010-11-24T12:02:43.267-06:00Mary,
Basically it is about my sister and I.
We do...Mary,<br />Basically it is about my sister and I.<br />We don't see eye to eye.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66056443701299115612010-11-24T12:01:30.519-06:002010-11-24T12:01:30.519-06:00Viv,
Through a difficult situation. A strained rel...Viv,<br />Through a difficult situation. A strained relationship with my sister.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-47245982082552839752010-11-24T12:00:07.135-06:002010-11-24T12:00:07.135-06:00Something like that Diane.
PamelaSomething like that Diane.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18852755863704009192010-11-24T07:29:15.236-06:002010-11-24T07:29:15.236-06:00This poem has a lot of contrasting images, a '...This poem has a lot of contrasting images, a 'dark' undertone, yet a beautiful blue lake. And yet the snakes! I'm curious too about its inspiration.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-2429553777156477732010-11-24T06:47:03.617-06:002010-11-24T06:47:03.617-06:00Why was the experience so dark? Where were you sw...Why was the experience so dark? Where were you swimming? I want to know more!<br />ViVAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18710884754354714852010-11-24T06:38:51.218-06:002010-11-24T06:38:51.218-06:00At least you got to swim in that beautiful blue la...At least you got to swim in that beautiful blue lake with your sister!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.com