tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post5366401748501652355..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Shirt Pocket Words" NaPoWriMo #11-Wordle from "Beyond the Bozone"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82643242475672403272011-04-12T12:56:48.956-05:002011-04-12T12:56:48.956-05:00Wordles will do that to a person, Mr. Walker:)Wordles will do that to a person, Mr. Walker:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3134524913473079312011-04-12T07:53:44.081-05:002011-04-12T07:53:44.081-05:00I like that "collection of phrases in my shir...I like that "collection of phrases in my shirt pocket" that haven't made their journey yet. Words waiting to be written in a poem. And I really like that juxtaposition in the last lines of the "dreamy thoughts" and the words "pushing and shoving".Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-76914499609876560182011-04-11T18:26:12.212-05:002011-04-11T18:26:12.212-05:00Thanks Twitches and I loved your broken window poe...Thanks Twitches and I loved your broken window poem:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52440742475809378052011-04-11T18:24:18.565-05:002011-04-11T18:24:18.565-05:00Love the last three lines! Very lyrical.Love the last three lines! Very lyrical.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64630045647425487592011-04-11T18:18:48.661-05:002011-04-11T18:18:48.661-05:00Delicious, oh my, thanks Mary.Delicious, oh my, thanks Mary.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25963733353048495652011-04-11T18:18:09.185-05:002011-04-11T18:18:09.185-05:00The wordle list is above the poem, Gloria and than...The wordle list is above the poem, Gloria and thank you.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-14644790572022157952011-04-11T17:53:45.172-05:002011-04-11T17:53:45.172-05:00What a delicious poem, Pamela! Love the way you i...What a delicious poem, Pamela! Love the way you incorporated al the words.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24348749187312393202011-04-11T17:47:31.099-05:002011-04-11T17:47:31.099-05:00I don't know what list of words you were given...I don't know what list of words you were given, but I never would have guessed this was a word list poem. It's a fantastic write, and I love the opening especially.Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18720085914113013312011-04-11T17:35:31.810-05:002011-04-11T17:35:31.810-05:00I might ask you the same exact question, RJ, for m...I might ask you the same exact question, RJ, for me it is mostly what I have read, i.e. books, newspaper articles, some images I notice in my daily routine ... conversations I have and as in the case of this poem, I haven't a clue:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55858334854026825652011-04-11T17:29:31.588-05:002011-04-11T17:29:31.588-05:00Thanks Linda:)Thanks Linda:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23384418631188517622011-04-11T17:17:59.664-05:002011-04-11T17:17:59.664-05:00Pamela - you are amazing! I think this just may b...Pamela - you are amazing! I think this just may be my favorite poem of yours to date! It just resonates! The first two lines pulled me in and the final two were just brilliant. <br /><br />Where DO you get your ideas?RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59648427009666021452011-04-11T15:07:06.389-05:002011-04-11T15:07:06.389-05:00I love the image of your shirt pocket filled with ...I love the image of your shirt pocket filled with words and phrases.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.com/2011/04/take-chance.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1410353888651270682011-04-11T14:59:52.873-05:002011-04-11T14:59:52.873-05:00That's an idea, Andy:)That's an idea, Andy:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31925322116183980912011-04-11T14:59:02.864-05:002011-04-11T14:59:02.864-05:00corrugated mind? I have no idea how that came to m...corrugated mind? I have no idea how that came to me, Marianne.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80880325634928304322011-04-11T14:57:42.978-05:002011-04-11T14:57:42.978-05:00Thanks for the prompt, girl:)Thanks for the prompt, girl:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32547155705756710802011-04-11T14:57:07.644-05:002011-04-11T14:57:07.644-05:00Not sure where that came from, Tilly, I rarely wea...Not sure where that came from, Tilly, I rarely wear shirts with pockets:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8149812171627311732011-04-11T14:56:20.818-05:002011-04-11T14:56:20.818-05:00Do you think so, Ron, ha ha ha!Do you think so, Ron, ha ha ha!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51833733785857084162011-04-11T14:55:43.318-05:002011-04-11T14:55:43.318-05:00You are too kind, Dave.You are too kind, Dave.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38332906835400031812011-04-11T14:53:44.939-05:002011-04-11T14:53:44.939-05:00Thanks Stan:)Thanks Stan:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49501506385145397022011-04-11T14:53:03.732-05:002011-04-11T14:53:03.732-05:00Well, I am flattered, Viv.Well, I am flattered, Viv.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19140579620623233272011-04-11T14:51:44.935-05:002011-04-11T14:51:44.935-05:00Amy, thanks.Amy, thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80192858372142900702011-04-11T12:14:05.670-05:002011-04-11T12:14:05.670-05:00Beautifully done! I like the way you put this toge...Beautifully done! I like the way you put this together, maybe you could use 'Hovels' in the title.Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18655424144326553242011-04-11T08:09:38.268-05:002011-04-11T08:09:38.268-05:00I LOVE what you've done with Brenda's word...I LOVE what you've done with Brenda's wordle prompt! "Corrugated mind, Scrambling triumphs, dreamy thoughts that hum." So many wonderful images. This is a beautiful poem.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13554344589471841002011-04-11T07:03:13.294-05:002011-04-11T07:03:13.294-05:00Well executed wordle...you whirdled round the worl...Well executed wordle...you whirdled round the world! ~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29711796486075609012011-04-11T04:55:09.604-05:002011-04-11T04:55:09.604-05:00I like this line:
Collection of phrases in my shi...I like this line:<br /><br />Collection of phrases in my shirt pocketAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com