tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post5153640899569608779..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Winter Passes Through Summer" Writer's Island #19-SeasonUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9175106024460153552011-05-14T11:08:48.825-05:002011-05-14T11:08:48.825-05:00Pamela, I love "ocean's heartbeats" ...Pamela, I love "ocean's heartbeats" and the whole second stanza. I imagined a place where winters are mild, more like what we think of as summer.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71776494802608433652011-05-09T03:03:46.272-05:002011-05-09T03:03:46.272-05:00Love the mystery of it.
Anna :o]Love the mystery of it.<br /><br />Anna :o]Anna :o]http://puzzelicious.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10168433944521668782011-05-08T04:36:33.429-05:002011-05-08T04:36:33.429-05:00Fascinating take on the subject.Fascinating take on the subject.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88016759073061777092011-05-08T04:36:08.777-05:002011-05-08T04:36:08.777-05:00I love this and can here the shios smashing and se...I love this and can here the shios smashing and see the reflections BeautifulMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39549173764650074832011-05-08T02:36:45.078-05:002011-05-08T02:36:45.078-05:00I think she's trying to put right a bad memory...I think she's trying to put right a bad memory, or re-live a good one.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77532801671805774862011-05-07T21:40:05.208-05:002011-05-07T21:40:05.208-05:00Life can be like that, Paul. We try to catch thing...Life can be like that, Paul. We try to catch things before they slip away.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49891657213776893812011-05-07T21:38:54.532-05:002011-05-07T21:38:54.532-05:00That is good, Andy.That is good, Andy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26070053487867881682011-05-07T21:38:10.887-05:002011-05-07T21:38:10.887-05:00I wrote this yesterday, and it does fit to the pro...I wrote this yesterday, and it does fit to the prompt a bit, Mary. Thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51933376700400436162011-05-07T21:37:01.921-05:002011-05-07T21:37:01.921-05:00Thanks for that Berowne.Thanks for that Berowne.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34122772463594212572011-05-07T21:36:16.755-05:002011-05-07T21:36:16.755-05:00Thanks, Judy. Surreal is good.Thanks, Judy. Surreal is good.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43339637230797523192011-05-07T21:35:42.175-05:002011-05-07T21:35:42.175-05:00Thanks, Anthony.Thanks, Anthony.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3826425011154523212011-05-07T21:34:57.175-05:002011-05-07T21:34:57.175-05:00My favourite as well, Viv.My favourite as well, Viv.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81657427195617636662011-05-07T21:34:14.709-05:002011-05-07T21:34:14.709-05:00Thanks for the visit, Andy. I loved your mother...Thanks for the visit, Andy. I loved your mother's day poem:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37264196807229431472011-05-07T21:33:20.425-05:002011-05-07T21:33:20.425-05:00Thanks Brenda:)Thanks Brenda:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8053511209658885002011-05-07T20:50:19.070-05:002011-05-07T20:50:19.070-05:00I like the last stanza, pamela.
'...trying t...I like the last stanza, pamela. <br /><br />'...trying to catch pieces as they fall...' This could also be a metaphor for life, trying to stop it falling apart. <br /><br />I felt that as I read it. <br /><br />The great thing about poetry is it sparks things in us we didn't even know we were thinking. This last stanza made me think of something in my own life.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-56353548621099618202011-05-07T19:56:40.355-05:002011-05-07T19:56:40.355-05:00Wonderful images, this takes me many places!Wonderful images, this takes me many places!Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81310486291447686542011-05-07T19:06:08.513-05:002011-05-07T19:06:08.513-05:00Ships in glass bottles smashing
gazebo crumbling
i...Ships in glass bottles smashing<br />gazebo crumbling<br />icicles breaking.<br /><br />I can definitely sense the winter passing through summer.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40748564516615670112011-05-07T16:51:52.642-05:002011-05-07T16:51:52.642-05:00Awfully well written...Awfully well written...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69080502433127604402011-05-07T16:32:38.201-05:002011-05-07T16:32:38.201-05:00This brings such striking images to mind and feels...This brings such striking images to mind and feels so surreal as I read it. Beautiful.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70264018831713886252011-05-07T16:27:09.964-05:002011-05-07T16:27:09.964-05:00Beautiful imagery in this.Beautiful imagery in this.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-79261726236132384112011-05-07T16:03:03.703-05:002011-05-07T16:03:03.703-05:00That second stanza is a beauty. Lovely images.That second stanza is a beauty. Lovely images.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69594494437780333882011-05-07T14:58:40.496-05:002011-05-07T14:58:40.496-05:00I like the scenic mystery surrounding this.I like the scenic mystery surrounding this.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54313189522466626892011-05-07T14:42:50.381-05:002011-05-07T14:42:50.381-05:00That ladder beneath presence is an intriguing idea...That ladder beneath presence is an intriguing idea. You use rich precise language to create color, dance, shadows, sounds...I could hear the ocean. This is a beautiful poem.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com