tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post4975565241778086694..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: My big sister (narrative wallpaper)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17145197359144015682010-02-08T13:55:46.348-06:002010-02-08T13:55:46.348-06:00Madeline,
Thanks for your comment and thanks for ...Madeline,<br /><br />Thanks for your comment and thanks for stopping by.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80843960573350747542010-02-08T13:19:41.702-06:002010-02-08T13:19:41.702-06:00This is a lovely memory, charmingly related. Than...This is a lovely memory, charmingly related. Thank you.madeline d. murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13956396508529229674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37338571644836903652010-02-07T17:39:38.172-06:002010-02-07T17:39:38.172-06:00Thanks so much Allan. I cherish my sister always h...Thanks so much Allan. I cherish my sister always have and always will.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36609637593212051592010-02-07T16:12:28.590-06:002010-02-07T16:12:28.590-06:00This is what big sisters are for. I have one--pret...This is what big sisters are for. I have one--pretty bossy, too-love her to death. Thanks for reminding me of that. I also like the cat and cold floor. More memories right with you. Thanks!Allan Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18269413509026705846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19298303057284259652010-02-07T13:10:37.691-06:002010-02-07T13:10:37.691-06:00Thanks Erin. I wrote this with my memory of my mor...Thanks Erin. I wrote this with my memory of my mornings with my sister. She used to take care of me on school days. Because both of my parents worked and they left the house very early in the morning. I really enjoyed my mornings with her. Thanks for stopping by.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-76881252526144333552010-02-07T12:34:41.511-06:002010-02-07T12:34:41.511-06:00What a great job you have done using language to t...What a great job you have done using language to take us right back to a scene from your childhood. It seems like the adult consciousness is echoed in the "going to be late refrain."Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34302203990689998962010-02-06T20:44:44.262-06:002010-02-06T20:44:44.262-06:00Thanks so much Susan!
I love my big sister so muc...Thanks so much Susan! <br />I love my big sister so much to this very day!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26740065693441953812010-02-06T20:36:29.965-06:002010-02-06T20:36:29.965-06:00A sweet poem that says so much about life and the ...A sweet poem that says so much about life and the caretaking that goes with it. I enjoyed this!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71655827066670694452010-02-05T20:25:25.237-06:002010-02-05T20:25:25.237-06:00Wayne as usual you quick with your wit. I am glad ...Wayne as usual you quick with your wit. I am glad you liked it. <br /><br />Cheers to you my friend!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5977115917226497422010-02-05T19:07:54.962-06:002010-02-05T19:07:54.962-06:00nicely done Pam...at my age I have no time to be l...nicely done Pam...at my age I have no time to be late...thanks again for sharing..cheersWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83553681145388022432010-02-05T18:00:42.100-06:002010-02-05T18:00:42.100-06:00Paul thanks so much for the comment and taking you...Paul thanks so much for the comment and taking your time to stop by. I cherished my big sister then and still do.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83812376994146438652010-02-05T13:40:19.355-06:002010-02-05T13:40:19.355-06:00I like the refrain running throughout: Hurry up; y...I like the refrain running throughout: Hurry up; you're going to be late. Coming from the mouth of a an older sibling to a child at the beginning of the day it made a crisp contrast to the image I constantly hear in my head from TS Eliot's "The Waste Land," where, in the second section the pub keeper urges people to finish their drinks and head home at the end of the night with the refrain, "Hurry up please it's time."<br /><br />Birth to childhood to adulthood to death, it's all a hurry for fear of being late or missing something or interfering with the proper functions of business. Your older sister wasn't just getting your to school, she was training you for life.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing the memory.Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44892587182909427212010-02-04T17:18:17.217-06:002010-02-04T17:18:17.217-06:00Ana thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Pamela...Ana thanks for stopping by and commenting.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80875630024248111862010-02-04T15:15:38.607-06:002010-02-04T15:15:38.607-06:00what better than use a simplelanguage flowing, to ...what better than use a simplelanguage flowing, to describe childhood memoriesAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.com