tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post4967789058513679269..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: can be felt sunday scribblings #224 sourceUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52458583689353710052010-07-20T07:52:06.872-05:002010-07-20T07:52:06.872-05:00Dee thanks for the nice comment!
PamelaDee thanks for the nice comment!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-76603345313591068442010-07-19T22:43:52.883-05:002010-07-19T22:43:52.883-05:00I love the feel of this - power insinuating itself...I love the feel of this - power insinuating itself, once it is there is just kind of seeps into al the corners and then takes over the person who thought they controlled it. Loved it!Dee Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29371326733112121212010-07-19T11:04:53.180-05:002010-07-19T11:04:53.180-05:00Julie
When I wrote it seemed to me more like a sna...Julie<br />When I wrote it seemed to me more like a snake also!<br />Thanks for commenting<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83099706961272333852010-07-19T10:55:52.987-05:002010-07-19T10:55:52.987-05:00I saw a snake slithering.... perhaps because I enc...I saw a snake slithering.... perhaps because I encountered one on my weekend adventure.<br /><br />Enjoyed the word combinations, Pamela!<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/07/ten-seconds-of-silence-a-poem-for-one-singular-impression-.html" rel="nofollow"> My Sunday Scribbling... (posted on Monday!) </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66016322138969761202010-07-19T08:50:51.254-05:002010-07-19T08:50:51.254-05:00Oldegg Thanks for the nice comment!
PamelaOldegg Thanks for the nice comment!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90815929123814825782010-07-19T08:50:09.183-05:002010-07-19T08:50:09.183-05:00Old Grizz thanks for the comment!
PamelaOld Grizz thanks for the comment!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13482083909063507672010-07-19T08:49:09.212-05:002010-07-19T08:49:09.212-05:00Granny Smith Thanks for commenting and I hadn'...Granny Smith Thanks for commenting and I hadn't thought about it being electricity but I suppose so!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41439246767473646032010-07-19T02:01:07.093-05:002010-07-19T02:01:07.093-05:00I loved your vocabulary in this piece to tease us ...I loved your vocabulary in this piece to tease us in trying to find a meaning behind the poem. Personally I just enjoyed reading it.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28311553190691268162010-07-18T23:02:17.127-05:002010-07-18T23:02:17.127-05:00Old Grizz sees the mis-use of power and I assume t...Old Grizz sees the mis-use of power and I assume the powere of one person over another. it coiled around me and would not le go. Interesting..mind provoking...thought titilating...goodGeorge S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13977701912944157312010-07-18T20:58:47.771-05:002010-07-18T20:58:47.771-05:00I saw electrical wires - but maybe that is because...I saw electrical wires - but maybe that is because my late husband was an electrical engineer.Granny Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37967069888220072032010-07-18T20:05:02.287-05:002010-07-18T20:05:02.287-05:00BJ Roan I had given this no thought to being a sto...BJ Roan I had given this no thought to being a storm but could be! Thanks for commenting!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12405141540808159822010-07-18T19:50:06.248-05:002010-07-18T19:50:06.248-05:00I don't write poetry, I'm mostly a fiction...I don't write poetry, I'm mostly a fiction writer, so I have trouble understanding and analyzing poetry. I'll just say I saw a thunder/tornado like storm. Am I close. I know, I know. Sorry.Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.com