tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post4212157719681168817..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Truly Asphyxiating" NaPoWriMo #19-colorUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10279172243706575812011-04-21T16:40:21.676-05:002011-04-21T16:40:21.676-05:00Not a favourite colour of mine, Judy.Not a favourite colour of mine, Judy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21235662531700556622011-04-21T16:39:45.057-05:002011-04-21T16:39:45.057-05:00As a matter of fact, I can, Elizabeth.As a matter of fact, I can, Elizabeth.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65572312606363440802011-04-21T16:38:57.469-05:002011-04-21T16:38:57.469-05:00Nice to see you, Ella.Nice to see you, Ella.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65643974330039722282011-04-21T16:38:19.042-05:002011-04-21T16:38:19.042-05:00You got that right, Gloria.You got that right, Gloria.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69064009335856383482011-04-21T16:37:48.707-05:002011-04-21T16:37:48.707-05:00I find the colour unnerving, Mr. Walker.I find the colour unnerving, Mr. Walker.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11768195448978040172011-04-21T16:37:05.203-05:002011-04-21T16:37:05.203-05:00Thanks Laurie:)Thanks Laurie:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13482031961013863342011-04-20T07:59:43.048-05:002011-04-20T07:59:43.048-05:00I felt myself trying to get a gulp of air as I rea...I felt myself trying to get a gulp of air as I read your poem. Chartreuse. I won't be looking at it the same way as I have. :)Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16980277273224848732011-04-19T22:28:38.225-05:002011-04-19T22:28:38.225-05:00Pamela, each word that you write lifts a bit of th...Pamela, each word that you write lifts a bit of that color away from you, lightens the hue, and allows a bit more fresh air. Can you feel it? I can. Love what playing with color can do,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59594438245093437452011-04-19T20:07:59.493-05:002011-04-19T20:07:59.493-05:00I love the way your wove it. The idea of it remind...I love the way your wove it. The idea of it reminds me of algae and how it lingers and grabs hold. You made this color so vibrant n' alive~ Abduction in color, how powerful~ Great Job!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7896674234603233212011-04-19T19:21:55.433-05:002011-04-19T19:21:55.433-05:00LOL, the word that comes to mind is 'gross'...LOL, the word that comes to mind is 'gross' so I'd say you've described it well. It really is a pukey color! ;) Good job with this one!!Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8268339315786157942011-04-19T19:17:24.949-05:002011-04-19T19:17:24.949-05:00"chartreuse mist eclipsing my expanse where I..."chartreuse mist eclipsing my expanse where I breathe" - that line really gets that asphyxiating feeling. Well done - it's a little unnerving - very effective.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72780756258058998262011-04-19T12:03:13.646-05:002011-04-19T12:03:13.646-05:00Pamela- I love the imagery and concise word choice...Pamela- I love the imagery and concise word choice here!<br /><br />~laurieLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3200839342987041872011-04-19T11:45:04.365-05:002011-04-19T11:45:04.365-05:00I was going for that effect, Sherry. You know like...I was going for that effect, Sherry. You know like something, that is not easy to get rid of.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-79863345349445273792011-04-19T11:41:40.352-05:002011-04-19T11:41:40.352-05:00Really, Marianne? I thought maybe it was a bit too...Really, Marianne? I thought maybe it was a bit too dark, though. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59341016407864429842011-04-19T11:38:04.783-05:002011-04-19T11:38:04.783-05:00It's an oppressive colour, Janet.It's an oppressive colour, Janet.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9780478161886435332011-04-19T11:37:27.647-05:002011-04-19T11:37:27.647-05:00Well, thank you very much, Brenda.Well, thank you very much, Brenda.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6017154322335372852011-04-19T11:36:38.561-05:002011-04-19T11:36:38.561-05:00It is an awful colour, Mary. I have a good friend ...It is an awful colour, Mary. I have a good friend in the states, who owned a chartreuse blouse and when she wore it, I would cringe.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16363914188508479192011-04-19T11:32:22.363-05:002011-04-19T11:32:22.363-05:00That's what I was trying to convey, Dave.That's what I was trying to convey, Dave.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64095345648297820372011-04-19T11:31:44.156-05:002011-04-19T11:31:44.156-05:00I'm all too familiar with the colour, Tilly:)I'm all too familiar with the colour, Tilly:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77695773981834893812011-04-19T11:31:03.072-05:002011-04-19T11:31:03.072-05:00I suppose it was brave, Ron:)I suppose it was brave, Ron:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43496379637911330642011-04-19T11:30:22.570-05:002011-04-19T11:30:22.570-05:00Me too Viv, it's nauseating.Me too Viv, it's nauseating.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3211395234875235792011-04-19T11:29:07.470-05:002011-04-19T11:29:07.470-05:00Thanks iself, it was this or write something about...Thanks iself, it was this or write something about a colour I like:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10244268401697801392011-04-19T11:28:03.653-05:002011-04-19T11:28:03.653-05:00Ive never had the liquor, Andy, but have seen plen...Ive never had the liquor, Andy, but have seen plenty of the colour in my life.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63071257748820296482011-04-19T11:26:43.537-05:002011-04-19T11:26:43.537-05:00It's not a colour I'm fond of, Stan.It's not a colour I'm fond of, Stan.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44646356153889619882011-04-19T11:17:35.262-05:002011-04-19T11:17:35.262-05:00It does have a liquid swirly feel - very well done...It does have a liquid swirly feel - very well done, Pamela. One feels the.....caught-ness......and the smothering, very well.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com