tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post3348010326668838112..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Send the Angels to the Earth we write poems #40-triptychUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83505981964999165042011-02-10T13:12:24.956-06:002011-02-10T13:12:24.956-06:00Thanks RJ, this prompt was quite perplexing for me...Thanks RJ, this prompt was quite perplexing for me. Everyone wrote to it differently.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18443107219785811392011-02-10T11:36:44.902-06:002011-02-10T11:36:44.902-06:00Wow! You so well defined each concept, with a diz...Wow! You so well defined each concept, with a dizzying array of well-chosen modifiers! I'm not even sure which lines I like the best, because there are so many of them!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34478426090597062002011-02-10T08:46:55.111-06:002011-02-10T08:46:55.111-06:00I like the thoughts, the flow...and the connectivi...I like the thoughts, the flow...and the connectivity..<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/02/ransom.html" rel="nofollow">ransom</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31802038465175153212011-02-10T07:46:34.384-06:002011-02-10T07:46:34.384-06:00I really enjoyed how this poem flows, and I like t...I really enjoyed how this poem flows, and I like the contrasts between the three sections of the poem, tied to together so well!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17201905969156408122011-02-09T22:46:21.731-06:002011-02-09T22:46:21.731-06:00I think you did fine, Pamela. It has rich imagery ...I think you did fine, Pamela. It has rich imagery and I like your resolution of the problem.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71869445304011318612011-02-09T19:20:03.687-06:002011-02-09T19:20:03.687-06:00Pam, I do like the way you wrote in response to th...Pam, I do like the way you wrote in response to this prompt. Your idea of writing three separate poems was good one. I should have done that. I think that is what the challenge was about. I missed the proverbial boat. Of your three poems, I like the 'earth' poem the very best. Each of them, however, COULD stand alone. Nice work!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-89094944738877787912011-02-09T13:16:19.130-06:002011-02-09T13:16:19.130-06:00Judy, thank you. I was so confused with this promp...Judy, thank you. I was so confused with this prompt. After my list of words, I just wrote three different poems and tried to tie them together.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-57481472124181729612011-02-09T13:14:17.529-06:002011-02-09T13:14:17.529-06:00Elizabeth, you are much too kind. It seems everyon...Elizabeth, you are much too kind. It seems everyone did go in their own direction with this prompt. I wrote this mainly because I had no blooming idea what I was doing:) <br />I certainly appreciate your comments on my writing.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31263332655288655402011-02-09T12:53:34.833-06:002011-02-09T12:53:34.833-06:00Wow, I just love the way you gave life to the heav...Wow, I just love the way you gave life to the heaven, earth, and man prompt. Bravo! I especially like your "fanfare for goddesses", "trees line a swelled terrain", and "concrete walls covered with barbed wire". Brilliant!Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83942850078946190492011-02-09T12:50:33.308-06:002011-02-09T12:50:33.308-06:00I think you did just fine with the prompt. Everyon...I think you did just fine with the prompt. Everyone went in their own direction and that is exactly how it should be. I was perplexed as well, but finally took the plunge this morning. Was actually surprised at where I ended up.<br /><br />Love the angels trimming their sapphire wings, fireflies lighting up mountains, and barbed wire piercing thoughts and minds. Your poetry always has a certain flow to it. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/09/thank-you-neil-reid/noreply@blogger.com