tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2798080892826710906..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Velvet and Gold soaked in Red" One Shot Poetry #39Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83351419150325779042011-03-30T12:43:09.783-06:002011-03-30T12:43:09.783-06:00Oh, my, what a very nice thing to say, Barb.Oh, my, what a very nice thing to say, Barb.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43281835081921327882011-03-30T12:39:53.237-06:002011-03-30T12:39:53.237-06:00Thanks, Eric:)Thanks, Eric:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15802568728053947312011-03-30T12:39:22.127-06:002011-03-30T12:39:22.127-06:00So very true, Gordon, I know that of most of what ...So very true, Gordon, I know that of most of what I write, if it is forced or written in haste, it just doesn't turn out well. This sat on the back burner for awhile, until I felt it was time to finish it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-14093979520124765312011-03-30T12:36:15.370-06:002011-03-30T12:36:15.370-06:00Thanks so much, Anthony.Thanks so much, Anthony.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67468409518025087592011-03-30T12:35:47.020-06:002011-03-30T12:35:47.020-06:00Petrina, I tried to soften the story somewhat.Petrina, I tried to soften the story somewhat.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22137948500390464532011-03-30T12:34:49.403-06:002011-03-30T12:34:49.403-06:00It is a sad story, zouxzoux. Thanks.It is a sad story, zouxzoux. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39760987765679201642011-03-30T12:34:07.519-06:002011-03-30T12:34:07.519-06:00Yes, Brian, it could/does happen quite often.Yes, Brian, it could/does happen quite often.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6063647044807631202011-03-30T12:30:57.905-06:002011-03-30T12:30:57.905-06:00Thanks KB, nice to meet you.Thanks KB, nice to meet you.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61442712898954294262011-03-30T12:30:22.917-06:002011-03-30T12:30:22.917-06:00Thanks Joy Ann, it is a bit of a relief, to have f...Thanks Joy Ann, it is a bit of a relief, to have finished it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68179797975341843432011-03-30T12:29:22.328-06:002011-03-30T12:29:22.328-06:00Thanks Brenda, I have been working on this piece f...Thanks Brenda, I have been working on this piece for some time now. I wasn't certain where to go with it. I kept adding and taking away lines, it was really bothering me every time I looked at it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90631950838144580912011-03-30T10:52:49.608-06:002011-03-30T10:52:49.608-06:00Ah Pam a glorious write for these martyrs and wome...Ah Pam a glorious write for these martyrs and women....their history not forgotten and song out in chant and prayer....you always test the mind and bring to light thoughts left still in need of dusting and light...thank you...so much..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83485091747827458392011-03-30T08:26:05.299-06:002011-03-30T08:26:05.299-06:00So much good stuff in this one, Pam!
My favorite ...So much good stuff in this one, Pam!<br /><br />My favorite part: "prickling the senses"Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51172460905693514352011-03-30T07:12:03.928-06:002011-03-30T07:12:03.928-06:00Powerful poem with great images. The best poems a...Powerful poem with great images. The best poems always come with waiting!Gordon Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405099521661854141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29203419955719778792011-03-30T00:47:10.338-06:002011-03-30T00:47:10.338-06:00A poem that definitely had to be finished. Great w...A poem that definitely had to be finished. Great words.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24908179466609405162011-03-29T23:46:47.202-06:002011-03-29T23:46:47.202-06:00Stunning imagery, beautiful flow. Complex layers ...Stunning imagery, beautiful flow. Complex layers within its serenity.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8757515100484333682011-03-29T21:22:33.235-06:002011-03-29T21:22:33.235-06:00The telling of this piece is enchanting even thoug...The telling of this piece is enchanting even though the story is tinged with sorrow. Really nice work, Pamela. I'm glad you finished it.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17507156245567530302011-03-29T20:03:21.402-06:002011-03-29T20:03:21.402-06:00smome nice rhyme to create flow with it...and off ...smome nice rhyme to create flow with it...and off of the incident it is quite haunting...knowing...and it can happen to any of us...metaphorically...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-86957937060676722862011-03-29T19:36:36.651-06:002011-03-29T19:36:36.651-06:00I'm so happy you finished the poem. It's e...I'm so happy you finished the poem. It's excellent.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-89856461906747791282011-03-29T19:03:31.379-06:002011-03-29T19:03:31.379-06:00Read this several times and looked up the incident...Read this several times and looked up the incident. A very haunting poem, pamela, and the sense of an underlying madness is there as well, I think. I, too, am glad you finished it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66997735745213243192011-03-29T18:16:41.146-06:002011-03-29T18:16:41.146-06:00The last three lines of the first stanza are exqui...The last three lines of the first stanza are exquisite. Great images throughout. I'm glad you finished, giving these women voice. ~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com