tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2442557098864550489..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Your box" We Write Poems prompt #1 boxesUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6908921402239890292010-05-14T10:10:53.708-05:002010-05-14T10:10:53.708-05:00Wayne,
Thanks my friend. I love Lou Reed and that ...Wayne,<br />Thanks my friend. I love Lou Reed and that song "The Gift" was my inspiration here. I just gave it a twist.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51586872359819097352010-05-13T23:39:33.875-05:002010-05-13T23:39:33.875-05:00the great Lou Reed and a Fxxxxxg dirty postman...w...the great Lou Reed and a Fxxxxxg dirty postman...well I take my chances with Lou Reed...I think...or maybe.....hmmmm....anyways awsome PamWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18481548040699753092010-05-13T15:08:23.332-05:002010-05-13T15:08:23.332-05:00Thanks Nicole I enjoyed yours as well.
PamelaThanks Nicole I enjoyed yours as well.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26849109671131713592010-05-13T14:47:19.110-05:002010-05-13T14:47:19.110-05:00This poem is sweet and disturbing at the same time...This poem is sweet and disturbing at the same time. Your last line gives an interesting and surreal twist to the whole thing.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-56277255005478175762010-05-13T08:16:05.020-05:002010-05-13T08:16:05.020-05:00Patti,
Thanks for commenting. You gotta take care ...Patti,<br />Thanks for commenting. You gotta take care of the bad boys.;)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30235227542960546912010-05-13T08:15:09.601-05:002010-05-13T08:15:09.601-05:00Irene,
Thanks for saying so. He was very bad!
Pame...Irene,<br />Thanks for saying so. He was very bad!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59402834740204987412010-05-13T08:14:11.687-05:002010-05-13T08:14:11.687-05:00Francis,
Yeah the guy's name in the song was W...Francis,<br />Yeah the guy's name in the song was Waldo Jeffers. But I added a twist. Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60561253672847961182010-05-13T07:45:03.494-05:002010-05-13T07:45:03.494-05:00Love the humor- great interpretation!Love the humor- great interpretation!Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-87241130083996378452010-05-13T07:43:34.098-05:002010-05-13T07:43:34.098-05:00Pamela, this is lethal humour. It's funny, dis...Pamela, this is lethal humour. It's funny, disturbing and slightly surreal. Bad bad boy!--IreneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22320514184408166732010-05-13T00:43:17.044-05:002010-05-13T00:43:17.044-05:00As I was reading this I thought of that very song,...As I was reading this I thought of that very song, though you gave it a unique twist. I love the last line too.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49494889235216983332010-05-12T19:29:05.900-05:002010-05-12T19:29:05.900-05:00Robin,
Thanks. I loved your poem. And yes he was v...Robin,<br />Thanks. I loved your poem. And yes he was very bad indeed.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62424712905288106142010-05-12T19:23:45.730-05:002010-05-12T19:23:45.730-05:00Pamela--This is awesome! I imagine Sugar was quit...Pamela--This is awesome! I imagine Sugar was quite, quite naughty to deserve this!!! You have some great lines in this poem..."arrival on Saturday of next to never" and the last two.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237296406471830840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51805013464695893822010-05-12T17:45:21.721-05:002010-05-12T17:45:21.721-05:00No problem Brenda anytime. Thanks.
PamelaNo problem Brenda anytime. Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59916567285232131302010-05-12T17:30:16.392-05:002010-05-12T17:30:16.392-05:00Ah ha ha ha ha! Got what they deserved the villai...Ah ha ha ha ha! Got what they deserved the villains! This is awesome, I love it! <br /><br />The last line is my favorite.<br />Exquisite. Thanks for the smile that still cracks my face in half! ~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23163478622618467942010-05-12T16:02:31.668-05:002010-05-12T16:02:31.668-05:00Thanks mypoeticlicense. I appreciate that.
PamelaThanks mypoeticlicense. I appreciate that.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55843627605748503962010-05-12T15:56:07.800-05:002010-05-12T15:56:07.800-05:00That was great! Gross, but great! Love the use of...That was great! Gross, but great! Love the use of "butcher knife" and "lovely" in the same poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36571064303926936252010-05-12T11:08:55.283-05:002010-05-12T11:08:55.283-05:00Thinking about it ;) This idea came from a song by...Thinking about it ;) This idea came from a song by Lou Reed "The Gift". Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21889639544959480902010-05-12T11:04:56.290-05:002010-05-12T11:04:56.290-05:00OOOh.. love the ending... are you looking for more...OOOh.. love the ending... are you looking for more boxes?1965 Footprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08640917815632990664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82078643071102955562010-05-11T16:21:43.030-05:002010-05-11T16:21:43.030-05:00Thanks POP. Me too!
PamelaThanks POP. Me too!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52447430531555266192010-05-11T16:10:14.632-05:002010-05-11T16:10:14.632-05:00oh i like these keepsakes.....oh i like these keepsakes.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28431467214064233532010-05-11T08:52:12.594-05:002010-05-11T08:52:12.594-05:00Ha! Marianne he was a very bad boy!
PamelaHa! Marianne he was a very bad boy!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54142379843272330822010-05-11T07:59:10.917-05:002010-05-11T07:59:10.917-05:00"All in a row lovely boxes." Oh my! A v..."All in a row lovely boxes." Oh my! A very unique response to the prompt, Pamela! What did Sugar do to deserve this dastardly end?Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.com