tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2228025050124177257..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Lubricious men, frogs and loonsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34520799193706628322010-02-23T12:59:14.442-06:002010-02-23T12:59:14.442-06:00Wayne,
Thanks for commenting. Those people in cust...Wayne,<br />Thanks for commenting. Those people in customs can be very special indeed. What's wrong with extra Havana rum???? Cheers to you.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90110239440991083942010-02-23T12:57:05.846-06:002010-02-23T12:57:05.846-06:00Susan,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I am...Susan,<br />Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I am glad you loved it.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61355400640857612412010-02-21T20:27:41.285-06:002010-02-21T20:27:41.285-06:00nicely done Pam....footlocker through customs abou...nicely done Pam....footlocker through customs about as easy as extra Havana rum through the customs...cheersWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30069110024687507162010-02-20T23:50:26.769-06:002010-02-20T23:50:26.769-06:00Sometimes an escape is the only thing left - after...Sometimes an escape is the only thing left - after dying one's hair, of course. Love this piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-87808522982789175782010-02-19T18:00:42.501-06:002010-02-19T18:00:42.501-06:00Ofheart,
Thanks for commenting. I am so glad you l...Ofheart,<br />Thanks for commenting. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20987525030115623042010-02-19T15:28:13.135-06:002010-02-19T15:28:13.135-06:00I love this...the details of so many things...thin...I love this...the details of so many things...things...how the night can seem to go on forever...would love to run into one of your loons, such dreams to take us awayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51877163543743882502010-02-19T09:09:07.987-06:002010-02-19T09:09:07.987-06:00Rallentaanda,
Thanks for stopping by and commentin...Rallentaanda,<br />Thanks for stopping by and commenting. And I have done something like that at the customs counter before, lol. I am glad you enjoyed it. I really appreciate your comments. And by the way I am a blondie;)Well now I do have some grey hair. I went red about 20 years ago, but my natural blonde came back in about two weeks. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80917516565494947462010-02-19T01:48:20.714-06:002010-02-19T01:48:20.714-06:00Some of us live in a different hemisphere.I am liv...Some of us live in a different hemisphere.I am living in your future.. I will always be tomorrow for you(could be a poem)<br />Love your thought processes especially<br />trying to get a footlocker through customs..made me laugh...I know you have done something like this...I have!Enjoyed this.By the way if you want to attract a good<br />man (or any man) go for blonde!:))rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88063151048427280132010-02-18T21:57:33.068-06:002010-02-18T21:57:33.068-06:00Elizabeth,
Thanks so much for commenting and stopp...Elizabeth,<br />Thanks so much for commenting and stopping by. I have also been knwon to suffer from insomnia. How I hate that. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-79217213568862447582010-02-18T21:51:01.402-06:002010-02-18T21:51:01.402-06:00You capture the tormented back and forth of sleepl...You capture the tormented back and forth of sleepless nights (I know them well) with compelling images. I particularly like this line: "You contemplate dying your hair red tomorrow." I love that frogs also make an appearance in your poem.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16097289963025434403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51791086286337760942010-02-18T21:20:50.028-06:002010-02-18T21:20:50.028-06:00Thanks Percy for stopping by.
PamelaThanks Percy for stopping by.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22022305707649299392010-02-18T21:15:16.951-06:002010-02-18T21:15:16.951-06:00Well Barbara midnight is very late for me since my...Well Barbara midnight is very late for me since my first class starts at 7 a.m. But I really appreciate you stopping by and commenting. Thanks<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30640323875268242152010-02-18T21:12:55.343-06:002010-02-18T21:12:55.343-06:00Woe and alas! For I too am distracted and feelingl...Woe and alas! For I too am distracted and feelingly feel the pangs.Percy Bisque Silleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07253883982162490195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15647373149674916222010-02-18T20:01:25.794-06:002010-02-18T20:01:25.794-06:00Midnight's hardly late for me, so posting earl...Midnight's hardly late for me, so posting early's easy. I can also identify with you character's range of distraction. Especially the begin the book tomorrow idea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77323847948287640852010-02-18T18:44:40.030-06:002010-02-18T18:44:40.030-06:00Nicole thanks so much for your kind comments. I lo...Nicole thanks so much for your kind comments. I love your work and it is a real honor for me to have you like my work.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24420588272362733582010-02-18T18:43:07.529-06:002010-02-18T18:43:07.529-06:00MarianV,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
P...MarianV,<br />Thanks for stopping by and commenting.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59002126889599817432010-02-18T14:50:09.784-06:002010-02-18T14:50:09.784-06:00I like this. I've had uneasy (and sleepless ni...I like this. I've had uneasy (and sleepless nights) like what you describe in this piece. In this whole piece I see juxtapositions between the man on the cross and the salacious boyfriend, her impending fairytale dreams and the much colder reality. Good work this week.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68403202405600016952010-02-18T12:56:01.468-06:002010-02-18T12:56:01.468-06:00Loved the last 4 lines (the rest of the poem was g...Loved the last 4 lines (the rest of the poem was good, too,) but it took everything & put it together.<br /><br />After I posted the poem I went back to bed & back to sleep. But there were still a bunch of poems ahead of mine!MarianVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15082225086439064044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8466543393614323692010-02-18T12:42:56.672-06:002010-02-18T12:42:56.672-06:00Allan as always I appreciate your comments. I am g...Allan as always I appreciate your comments. I am glad you loved it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81621636715333245332010-02-18T12:41:39.516-06:002010-02-18T12:41:39.516-06:00motherveg thanks so much for stopping by and comme...motherveg thanks so much for stopping by and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6185070359089902632010-02-18T12:15:35.302-06:002010-02-18T12:15:35.302-06:00The solitary man on the wall reminded me, as he di...The solitary man on the wall reminded me, as he did you, to remain committed. Nice touch in this very busy night. After all, it's hard enough just to bend down to the foot of the bed to pull up the covers when you're cold. Love the energy here.Allan Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18269413509026705846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45152539383273800762010-02-18T11:26:40.373-06:002010-02-18T11:26:40.373-06:00enjoyed it, took me right into the room and felt t...enjoyed it, took me right into the room and felt the story unfold...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64829107700898476662010-02-18T11:21:16.167-06:002010-02-18T11:21:16.167-06:00Zuoxzoux I am glad you liked the insomniac's v...Zuoxzoux I am glad you liked the insomniac's variety of thoughts. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71650741173049340082010-02-18T11:19:36.524-06:002010-02-18T11:19:36.524-06:00Julie no I am not going to dye my hair red. I did ...Julie no I am not going to dye my hair red. I did that about 20 years ago, had it done professionally, cost me loads of money and my natural blonde hair starting coming back in about two weeks. It is my narrator and I am happy you enjoyed it. Now get some sleep.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1370120959689950672010-02-18T11:16:36.236-06:002010-02-18T11:16:36.236-06:00Anthony as always it is an honor to hear from you....Anthony as always it is an honor to hear from you. I am glad you liked it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com