tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post1952992483673608625..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "No More Jonquils" We Write Poems #46-Street Art PoemUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13701625725072486292011-03-29T10:18:55.401-06:002011-03-29T10:18:55.401-06:00Thanks, Jane, Matt and Annell:)Thanks, Jane, Matt and Annell:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60855967919965856822011-03-25T14:42:16.113-06:002011-03-25T14:42:16.113-06:00More wonderful writing, and love the image!More wonderful writing, and love the image!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27123100437667991742011-03-24T14:34:09.136-06:002011-03-24T14:34:09.136-06:00I found this very intense and focused. A powerful ...I found this very intense and focused. A powerful poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-92221363060950775172011-03-24T14:28:04.262-06:002011-03-24T14:28:04.262-06:00This is phenomenal! I love 'As the sun goes do...This is phenomenal! I love 'As the sun goes down in its dubious fashion' and 'my lonesome misery painted on this wall.' A fantastic poem.Jane Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80817148028914575922011-03-24T11:00:21.936-06:002011-03-24T11:00:21.936-06:00Thanks Gautami.Thanks Gautami.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44175995025878258462011-03-24T11:00:00.971-06:002011-03-24T11:00:00.971-06:00Tilly, the image does evoke some sadness.Tilly, the image does evoke some sadness.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41339912653636352682011-03-24T08:42:58.803-06:002011-03-24T08:42:58.803-06:00Heartfelt. That is only word I could think of.
fa...Heartfelt. That is only word I could think of.<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/face-on-walll.html" rel="nofollow">face on the wall</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91046626024788540432011-03-24T02:44:01.893-06:002011-03-24T02:44:01.893-06:00I love the title of this piece; it encompasses the...I love the title of this piece; it encompasses the whole theme. Incredibly sad.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-76012741184085976122011-03-23T20:12:21.282-06:002011-03-23T20:12:21.282-06:00Thanks for the visit, Mr. Walker. Haven't seen...Thanks for the visit, Mr. Walker. Haven't seen you around for some time.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46744905726882855072011-03-23T18:08:05.871-06:002011-03-23T18:08:05.871-06:00Pamela, I like how you wrote your poem from the pe...Pamela, I like how you wrote your poem from the perspective of the woman on the wall. Nicely done. Concise and powerful. I really liked "chain link enclosures crowning me".Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32728560891507384222011-03-23T14:15:40.070-06:002011-03-23T14:15:40.070-06:00An Interesting prompt, Nicole. I also, read the st...An Interesting prompt, Nicole. I also, read the story behind it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91803919456822539982011-03-23T13:37:09.984-06:002011-03-23T13:37:09.984-06:00I really like how you imbued her face with persona...I really like how you imbued her face with personality and pulled the scenery around her in to tell the story.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5917863233777611452011-03-23T13:33:42.796-06:002011-03-23T13:33:42.796-06:00Thanks, Brenda, I enjoyed your poem as well:)Thanks, Brenda, I enjoyed your poem as well:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3907373867809765972011-03-23T13:33:01.522-06:002011-03-23T13:33:01.522-06:00Thanks, Sherry, misery does make one lonesome.Thanks, Sherry, misery does make one lonesome.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10633437244178354842011-03-23T13:32:13.402-06:002011-03-23T13:32:13.402-06:00Thanks Marian, I have written it, as I see it.Thanks Marian, I have written it, as I see it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35249339778325139872011-03-23T11:04:40.457-06:002011-03-23T11:04:40.457-06:00Love it, Pamela! The colors created vibrant image...Love it, Pamela! The colors created vibrant imagery. Well done.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21717364060126758082011-03-23T10:17:15.273-06:002011-03-23T10:17:15.273-06:00Yes, exactly!!!! I went through the letting go of ...Yes, exactly!!!! I went through the letting go of picket fences dream, escaped the chain link cage - "lonesome misery". It gets so much better after! Well done, Pamela!!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9135466335287332972011-03-23T09:15:58.926-06:002011-03-23T09:15:58.926-06:00Takes my breath away at the ending. Really gets ...Takes my breath away at the ending. Really gets into the persona. Very Good descriptions!Marianvhttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.com