tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post1915169881451730727..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "In a Western Town" we write poems #44-make your own wordleUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-53119754695277763212011-03-10T20:49:15.643-06:002011-03-10T20:49:15.643-06:00Thanks, Carrie, good to see you.Thanks, Carrie, good to see you.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-2508046331458538192011-03-10T20:48:36.533-06:002011-03-10T20:48:36.533-06:00Thanks much, Sherry.Thanks much, Sherry.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91545567377901616742011-03-10T20:47:54.110-06:002011-03-10T20:47:54.110-06:00Thanks Gautami:)Thanks Gautami:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19160617979286269632011-03-10T20:47:25.108-06:002011-03-10T20:47:25.108-06:00Joseph, there is a story to be told here:)Joseph, there is a story to be told here:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39010019664617365792011-03-10T20:46:31.093-06:002011-03-10T20:46:31.093-06:00Elizabeth, I would like to hear what the horseman ...Elizabeth, I would like to hear what the horseman has to say, too. I know that quote is great, one of my favourites.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50283250546811705542011-03-10T20:43:24.124-06:002011-03-10T20:43:24.124-06:00Thank you, Shari:)Thank you, Shari:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-86919104033620700852011-03-10T20:42:44.656-06:002011-03-10T20:42:44.656-06:00Thanks, RJ:)Thanks, RJ:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-74811623842703987312011-03-10T20:42:11.650-06:002011-03-10T20:42:11.650-06:00Nice thing to say, Ben.Nice thing to say, Ben.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44521822686670928872011-03-10T20:41:26.840-06:002011-03-10T20:41:26.840-06:00Barb, it has been a long time, since I have seen
t...Barb, it has been a long time, since I have seen<br />that movie.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40924082741483980032011-03-10T20:40:24.921-06:002011-03-10T20:40:24.921-06:00Me too, Brendan:)Me too, Brendan:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71803828669492379882011-03-10T20:39:49.285-06:002011-03-10T20:39:49.285-06:00You can if you want to, Brenda:)You can if you want to, Brenda:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17319127899471028472011-03-10T20:39:01.421-06:002011-03-10T20:39:01.421-06:00Thanks, Irene.Thanks, Irene.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-4313528675773327312011-03-10T20:38:28.370-06:002011-03-10T20:38:28.370-06:00Wow, Annell, glad you could read so much in it.Wow, Annell, glad you could read so much in it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10225686910530045792011-03-10T20:37:35.689-06:002011-03-10T20:37:35.689-06:00Thanks tas.Thanks tas.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11831500580586873262011-03-10T11:13:29.746-06:002011-03-10T11:13:29.746-06:00Love this Pamela...you are quite the story teller ...Love this Pamela...you are quite the story teller indeed! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9022048390474972612011-03-10T10:06:36.488-06:002011-03-10T10:06:36.488-06:00Wow, this is an amazing poem, and tells a poignant...Wow, this is an amazing poem, and tells a poignant tale. I love the idea of the book hidden in the saddlebag and the preacher dreaming of "a hawk-winged prophet's return"......and then the boy, also waiting.......just lovely. A highly enjoyable read.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46202635848830054822011-03-10T08:46:02.548-06:002011-03-10T08:46:02.548-06:00Wonderful narration...
walk the worldWonderful narration...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/walk-world.html" rel="nofollow">walk the world</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46164560659580811182011-03-09T22:43:28.853-06:002011-03-09T22:43:28.853-06:00Cryptic narrative... there's a lot lurking und...Cryptic narrative... there's a lot lurking underneath, I think. Makes me think of post-apocalyptic a little bit. :)Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50902841822024210062011-03-09T16:19:36.696-06:002011-03-09T16:19:36.696-06:00Pamela, there is a yearning that seeps through you...Pamela, there is a yearning that seeps through your poem, just beneath the story well told. I'm with the young boy, "come back and read from your book."<br /><br />Also really like the Yeats quote,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6577630865466212872011-03-09T09:54:22.574-06:002011-03-09T09:54:22.574-06:00What a wonderful story! Great images paint a clear...What a wonderful story! Great images paint a clear picture for me. Very nicely done.<br /><br />ShariShari Smothershttp://slstellingstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25204811809053694652011-03-09T08:41:27.841-06:002011-03-09T08:41:27.841-06:00Pamela - you really can tell a story! You can tas...Pamela - you really can tell a story! You can taste the dust and feel a piece of history as it races by on speedy hooves.RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35010411964039285562011-03-09T08:40:13.035-06:002011-03-09T08:40:13.035-06:00Awesome scene. Reminds me a bit of Henry Wadswort...Awesome scene. Reminds me a bit of Henry Wadsworth Longfellow's "The Tide Rises, The Tide Falls" which is a pretty rad poem as well. Your has the same mysterious, enticing feel as I read it.Benhttp://planb-publishing.com/AuthorsBlognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19947297189624188212011-03-09T08:38:49.194-06:002011-03-09T08:38:49.194-06:00Makes me think of "The Quick and the Dead&quo...Makes me think of "The Quick and the Dead". Same air of oddness hiding a tale.barbarahttp://catsdetour.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67829543296562144392011-03-09T07:25:11.870-06:002011-03-09T07:25:11.870-06:00We don't get enough narrative poems here. Grea...We don't get enough narrative poems here. Great to see you about it. I'd love to hear that wild horsemen read a few pages from his book, too. -- BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-56914235569202373812011-03-09T06:26:21.121-06:002011-03-09T06:26:21.121-06:00Pamela, You make me want to bare my shoulders. :)...Pamela, You make me want to bare my shoulders. :) Strong images run through this piece...I love it!<br />!Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com