tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post1611001781751916231..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Dreams and Realty" big tent poetry #39-wordleUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38218622518540043892011-02-05T19:11:50.047-06:002011-02-05T19:11:50.047-06:00Thanks Deb:)Thanks Deb:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31738776788283668072011-02-05T19:11:01.905-06:002011-02-05T19:11:01.905-06:00I was staying away from the dark, Victoria.I was staying away from the dark, Victoria.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55914405553267517362011-02-05T19:09:50.730-06:002011-02-05T19:09:50.730-06:00Nice one Christopher!Nice one Christopher!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48342506518105208722011-02-05T19:09:18.855-06:002011-02-05T19:09:18.855-06:00The sound of coffee grinding in the morning is
a ...The sound of coffee grinding in the morning is <br />a wake up call:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22038920954931484712011-02-05T19:08:23.227-06:002011-02-05T19:08:23.227-06:00Yeah, Barb, economy is the word. This practically
...Yeah, Barb, economy is the word. This practically<br />wrote itself. I only edited one line.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91308668744784511372011-02-05T19:06:50.063-06:002011-02-05T19:06:50.063-06:00Ha! ok Twitches ;)Ha! ok Twitches ;)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36380476603429236792011-02-05T19:06:10.456-06:002011-02-05T19:06:10.456-06:00I love my coffee, too, Mary.I love my coffee, too, Mary.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31478582761726631992011-02-05T19:05:15.037-06:002011-02-05T19:05:15.037-06:00Robin, it is common for me:)Robin, it is common for me:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-14269305584459688052011-02-05T19:04:25.861-06:002011-02-05T19:04:25.861-06:00Susan thanks:)Susan thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84664402882301160852011-02-05T18:59:37.205-06:002011-02-05T18:59:37.205-06:00Thanks Elizabeth and often I feel this way.Thanks Elizabeth and often I feel this way.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59955690730474820022011-02-05T18:58:42.453-06:002011-02-05T18:58:42.453-06:00Me too, Laurie:)Me too, Laurie:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9673094172526663542011-02-05T16:47:54.712-06:002011-02-05T16:47:54.712-06:00Good rendition of that between time of awareness &...Good rendition of that between time of awareness & sleep.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70714360758884402482011-02-05T13:04:09.438-06:002011-02-05T13:04:09.438-06:00Pamela, your use of the words was so clever. Yes, ...Pamela, your use of the words was so clever. Yes, you had a bit of suspense (which the words did conjure up) with a surprising resolution.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40074326968877893452011-02-05T07:54:41.750-06:002011-02-05T07:54:41.750-06:00Turning Point
I like to wake before you,
go downs...<b>Turning Point</b><br /><br />I like to wake before you,<br />go downstairs to birds<br />as they rustle up<br />their grub, and me too. I start<br />the coffee for you<br />and my tea water<br />and think about our latest<br />discussion, last night,<br />how all is changing.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25003751373894596052011-02-05T07:28:29.614-06:002011-02-05T07:28:29.614-06:00. . . great phrase "moving a blade's inch.... . . great phrase "moving a blade's inch." You have captured that space between sleeping and waking very well, and like others, I liked the ending. Dream-state to reality with the grind of a bean.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12921677490101301112011-02-05T01:40:28.215-06:002011-02-05T01:40:28.215-06:00Chuckle.
And so very economical with your wordsChuckle.<br />And so very economical with your wordsbarbarahttp://catsdetour.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44270574990415701042011-02-04T23:26:55.425-06:002011-02-04T23:26:55.425-06:00i thought of those Paranormal Activity movies. LOL...i thought of those Paranormal Activity movies. LOL.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5602556258543398842011-02-04T20:35:46.911-06:002011-02-04T20:35:46.911-06:00I enjoyed the ending too. I took it as you were i...I enjoyed the ending too. I took it as you were in the middle of some kind of early morning disorientation between sleep and waking, but then were greeted with the 'coffee' wakeup call! I need MY coffee in the A.M. too!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84673703432465923602011-02-04T20:30:15.982-06:002011-02-04T20:30:15.982-06:00That strange time between sleeping and waking, the...That strange time between sleeping and waking, the disorientation--this really resonates. Had this sort of experience just this morning. Great poem, Pamela.Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25723021888704976942011-02-04T17:47:18.192-06:002011-02-04T17:47:18.192-06:00A great merger! Love it...A great merger! Love it...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55883222021198763162011-02-04T15:47:37.572-06:002011-02-04T15:47:37.572-06:00I like your description of that moment between sle...I like your description of that moment between sleeping and waking and how disorienting it can be. And really enjoyed the ending. Really good response to the wordle,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/03/wordle-frustration/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49087159603741511202011-02-04T14:40:33.694-06:002011-02-04T14:40:33.694-06:00Great take on the prompt... I especially like the ...Great take on the prompt... I especially like the 4th and 5th lines.<br /><br />I love wordles, too.<br /><br />~laurieLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3548844193870139342011-02-04T13:18:33.612-06:002011-02-04T13:18:33.612-06:00Linda, a surprise ending not my usual fanfare.
Tha...Linda, a surprise ending not my usual fanfare.<br />Thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69736928280670201442011-02-04T13:17:46.045-06:002011-02-04T13:17:46.045-06:00Dick, that is one of the things I love about wordl...Dick, that is one of the things I love about wordles. Thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62679417522472208112011-02-04T13:16:41.374-06:002011-02-04T13:16:41.374-06:00James, I must have my coffee in the mornings.
Than...James, I must have my coffee in the mornings.<br />Thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com