tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post8898878860542527429..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: springtime we write poems #4 doorsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27924065832807628362010-06-03T23:46:44.732-05:002010-06-03T23:46:44.732-05:00Wayne my friend always a pleasure to hear from you...Wayne my friend always a pleasure to hear from you and thanks for a great prompt!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26603090233597349252010-06-03T23:20:53.550-05:002010-06-03T23:20:53.550-05:00doors can be hard to open...and easy to close also...doors can be hard to open...and easy to close also...anyways well done PamWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67830515767552433022010-06-03T12:24:47.256-05:002010-06-03T12:24:47.256-05:00Thanks Dina and I enjoyed yours as well!
PamelaThanks Dina and I enjoyed yours as well!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71650133514910463382010-06-03T12:06:08.017-05:002010-06-03T12:06:08.017-05:00Such bravery in throwing open that door. I like t...Such bravery in throwing open that door. I like that it was widdled down to so few words, all working together easily to get the feeling across.<br /><br />- DinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-3009932740953956512010-06-03T11:11:04.189-05:002010-06-03T11:11:04.189-05:00Thanks Nicole I always appreciate your commenting ...Thanks Nicole I always appreciate your commenting on my poems!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13659699975155307562010-06-03T10:12:50.784-05:002010-06-03T10:12:50.784-05:00The door that so many of us are afraid to walk thr...The door that so many of us are afraid to walk through. I love how you weaved in the concept of theatre, called to the stage by circumstance. What masks we done depends on us. Well done.<br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72377799107303484772010-06-03T09:46:08.118-05:002010-06-03T09:46:08.118-05:00Neil
Thanks for saying so I really enjoyed this pr...Neil<br />Thanks for saying so I really enjoyed this prompt!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91234890800330987572010-06-03T09:10:45.963-05:002010-06-03T09:10:45.963-05:00Very powerful for so very few words. Excellent Pa...Very powerful for so very few words. Excellent Pamela!neil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32194813589221736602010-06-03T00:43:07.184-05:002010-06-03T00:43:07.184-05:00Thanks Paul! and thanks for commenting!
PamelaThanks Paul! and thanks for commenting!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39069714916319354062010-06-02T20:05:12.114-05:002010-06-02T20:05:12.114-05:00So compact, such impact - that's one strong do...So compact, such impact - that's one strong door!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24695991408539336762010-06-02T18:50:35.490-05:002010-06-02T18:50:35.490-05:00Thanks Linda I am glad your thought decided not to...Thanks Linda I am glad your thought decided not to stick around ;)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51726879519117051252010-06-02T18:38:01.060-05:002010-06-02T18:38:01.060-05:00Yep -- tragedy and comedy. Yin and Yang. But, I di...Yep -- tragedy and comedy. Yin and Yang. But, I did have a fleeting thought...and said, "nah." Good stuff!Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11314386015619797752010-06-02T18:36:08.788-05:002010-06-02T18:36:08.788-05:00Thanks Francis do not know why but this just seeme...Thanks Francis do not know why but this just seemed like it worked well. <br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88998111916486059282010-06-02T18:01:03.327-05:002010-06-02T18:01:03.327-05:00It's not an easy thing to write about that fin...It's not an easy thing to write about that final and most challenging of passages, but you did it well.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54592236082364018452010-06-02T16:32:00.663-05:002010-06-02T16:32:00.663-05:00Thanks Brenda ;) always enjoy you stopping by!
Pam...Thanks Brenda ;) always enjoy you stopping by!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61359464045627000472010-06-02T16:24:47.768-05:002010-06-02T16:24:47.768-05:00Wow...Well done Pamela. I am impressed. Sad and p...Wow...Well done Pamela. I am impressed. Sad and powerful words you weave here!Brendahttp://bozone-bw.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60733089494467138672010-06-02T15:20:04.953-05:002010-06-02T15:20:04.953-05:00Thanks Mary! there is a depth to which I feel I ca...Thanks Mary! there is a depth to which I feel I can touch here but nothing more<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26182262331309499752010-06-02T14:25:12.025-05:002010-06-02T14:25:12.025-05:00Pamela, I was glad to read in the comments that th...Pamela, I was glad to read in the comments that this is not autobiographical. I had wondered. You wrote about the subject from within though, as if you truly knew. What I think about most at the moment is combining hysteria with joy. At first it seemed an improbably combination, but the more I thought about it........ Nice work!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46668580662089117832010-06-02T12:04:29.239-05:002010-06-02T12:04:29.239-05:00Gautami
I am glad u found it! Thanks for that!
Pam...Gautami<br />I am glad u found it! Thanks for that!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30813039493611135302010-06-02T12:03:36.929-05:002010-06-02T12:03:36.929-05:00Thanks heartspell!Thanks heartspell!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24260689968528170242010-06-02T11:34:56.075-05:002010-06-02T11:34:56.075-05:00I like the positive message here!
sky as the can...I like the positive message here!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/05/sky-as-my-canvas-of-thoughts.html" rel="nofollow">sky as the canvas of my thoughts</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-75005866782185329602010-06-02T11:25:42.222-05:002010-06-02T11:25:42.222-05:00The door of histeria and joy.... I love this combi...The door of histeria and joy.... I love this combination. Well done.<br />HeartspellHeartspellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8946181215927906502010-06-02T10:42:14.307-05:002010-06-02T10:42:14.307-05:00Barb,
I like what you got from this poem
I almost...Barb, <br />I like what you got from this poem<br />I almost was getting the feeling that some people thought of it as an autobiography which it is not of course!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1468802519935720712010-06-02T10:27:27.874-05:002010-06-02T10:27:27.874-05:00A greek play, mask and robe and flowing veil. The ...A greek play, mask and robe and flowing veil. The pain inside can be behind any mask. I like: put forth some integrity. That's advice you don't have to give yourself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-73442729437160694842010-06-02T09:02:10.099-05:002010-06-02T09:02:10.099-05:00Diane indeed it is!
Thanks for commenting.
PamelaDiane indeed it is!<br />Thanks for commenting.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com