tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post7987297509842231965..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: “Poem Starting with a Line from Norman Dubie.” napowrimo #13Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44666533785180164902010-04-14T17:31:01.088-05:002010-04-14T17:31:01.088-05:00Eryl: Thanks so much!
Mark: Thank you!
omb: Thanks...Eryl: Thanks so much!<br />Mark: Thank you!<br />omb: Thanks!<br />Wayne: Thanks so much! Yay! the village is cooool!<br />Jason: Gracias!<br />Rall: I am letting it hang hon! Thanks.<br />Susan: Thanks!<br />Richelle: Thanks for the compliment!<br />Shari: You're too kind!<br />Robin: Thank you!<br />Jseph: Thanks ;)<br />Irene: Thanks for stopping by!<br />Uma: Thank you!<br />Francis: Did anybody use this line? I thought it was an interesting line. Thanks!<br />Erin: Thanks!<br />Jason: Cool ;)<br />James: Glad you loved it!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15115215482780306302010-04-14T15:13:14.508-05:002010-04-14T15:13:14.508-05:00I love the image of the stylish horse and the glim...I love the image of the stylish horse and the glimpses of his days as a pony.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27713983657181809682010-04-14T08:05:52.736-05:002010-04-14T08:05:52.736-05:00I really dig this one, Pamela. Thanks.I really dig this one, Pamela. Thanks.Jason Cranehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16378703004144129880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21107085433299472922010-04-13T23:00:09.275-05:002010-04-13T23:00:09.275-05:00Powerful juxtaposition of images, Pamela! wow!Powerful juxtaposition of images, Pamela! wow!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-14953119695794631792010-04-13T21:51:44.258-05:002010-04-13T21:51:44.258-05:00I thought about using this one, but you took it in...I thought about using this one, but you took it in a very different (and very cool) direction than I would have.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61404835464165433532010-04-13T21:42:30.532-05:002010-04-13T21:42:30.532-05:00pamela, this is so good - what you have done to No...pamela, this is so good - what you have done to Norman Dubie's line.Uma Gowrishankarhttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60870137785109821392010-04-13T20:27:59.600-05:002010-04-13T20:27:59.600-05:00Pamela, you conjure up with great details.Pamela, you conjure up with great details.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66082528913550528522010-04-13T19:55:21.463-05:002010-04-13T19:55:21.463-05:00Ha, excellent... great blend of humor and philosop...Ha, excellent... great blend of humor and philosophy. I think the card game is my favorite part. ^_^ (The dinner bowl line rocks too.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72018211014119730742010-04-13T19:52:59.915-05:002010-04-13T19:52:59.915-05:00Powerful stuff here! Scraping burnt earth into my ...Powerful stuff here! Scraping burnt earth into my dinner bowl...what an image!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02237296406471830840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71373927765589509042010-04-13T19:51:10.382-05:002010-04-13T19:51:10.382-05:00Amazing, profound imagery, Pamela. You have a love...Amazing, profound imagery, Pamela. You have a lovely way of telling a haunting tale. Very nicely done!<br />ShariShari Smothershttp://slstellingstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5184027560137197452010-04-13T19:43:15.790-05:002010-04-13T19:43:15.790-05:00Wow, great poem, Pamela! I think is definitely one...Wow, great poem, Pamela! I think is definitely one of your best that I've read on here! I love the images, especially the line "scraping burnt earth into my dinner bowl." Good work!Richelle Dodarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15010225323562785463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80328586052361754362010-04-13T19:42:29.569-05:002010-04-13T19:42:29.569-05:00love it... it definitely went out with a bang!love it... it definitely went out with a bang!Red Shoe Artisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12624556640303519060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5985755601198324342010-04-13T19:25:36.940-05:002010-04-13T19:25:36.940-05:00Poetry is great as therapy .Let it all hang out Pa...Poetry is great as therapy .Let it all hang out Pam. Good for you.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-42635588177123999302010-04-13T19:22:48.568-05:002010-04-13T19:22:48.568-05:00This drags my mind almost unwillingly into quite a...This drags my mind almost unwillingly into quite a few different directions. Really well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-86915762328708199302010-04-13T19:06:24.873-05:002010-04-13T19:06:24.873-05:00thanks for your poem Pam...well done...NY NY hu......thanks for your poem Pam...well done...NY NY hu...spent some time there in late 50s and early 60s..lots of time in the Village..I think we might be taking a trip there next yearWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36225630712286065702010-04-13T18:31:09.243-05:002010-04-13T18:31:09.243-05:00i saw that line too and really like how you comple...i saw that line too and really like how you completed a whole other world of yr own... <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/poem-starting-with-a-line-from-norman-dubie/" rel="nofollow">poem... </a>one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/04/13/poem-starting-with-a-line-from-norman-dubie/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-962295004619255222010-04-13T18:19:00.435-05:002010-04-13T18:19:00.435-05:00Love the images and stories you conjure in your po...Love the images and stories you conjure in your poetry. That is a great last line!!<br /><br />Well done, Pamela!<br /><br />~Markmarkooliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08274475767714546790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20384076612326061432010-04-13T17:59:43.579-05:002010-04-13T17:59:43.579-05:00Killer last line, Pamela!Killer last line, Pamela!Erylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06008344023000459577noreply@blogger.com