tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post7957741313796451675..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "a hidden key" Writer's Island prompt #3Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-59779697094084930982010-05-21T12:24:43.571-05:002010-05-21T12:24:43.571-05:00Wayne Thanks a lot for commenting. I have missed r...Wayne Thanks a lot for commenting. I have missed reading your writing.<br />Cheers from Mexico<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41702227001775396462010-05-20T23:55:37.795-05:002010-05-20T23:55:37.795-05:00nice one Pam....I felt comfortable with this....t...nice one Pam....I felt comfortable with this....thanks again for sharing....Im so busy lately that seems I can only do one poem a week..so I havent done much on the other sites...cheers from CanadaWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16895931203239982472010-05-18T12:03:58.107-05:002010-05-18T12:03:58.107-05:00Hi Viv,
Thanks for the nice comment. I realize thi...Hi Viv,<br />Thanks for the nice comment. I realize this is an uncomfortable poem. I was using some info from Poe's life and this is where I ended up.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27682770391534390662010-05-18T09:25:51.465-05:002010-05-18T09:25:51.465-05:00I think I will hang on to this thought: 'livi...I think I will hang on to this thought: 'living is more essential'<br />An uncomfortable poem, beautifully written. Nobody said poetry should be easy!vivienne blakehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-86032526788777798652010-05-18T09:20:43.500-05:002010-05-18T09:20:43.500-05:00Nicole,
Do you really thinks so? Can madness be th...Nicole,<br />Do you really thinks so? Can madness be that bad? Hey, thanks for commenting.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30146872697573993862010-05-18T09:16:18.046-05:002010-05-18T09:16:18.046-05:00Uma,
Thanks for the nice comment.
PamelaUma,<br />Thanks for the nice comment.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1377663020754430912010-05-18T08:34:43.766-05:002010-05-18T08:34:43.766-05:00In spite of how you describe the outcome of taking...In spite of how you describe the outcome of taking the key, the poem still leaves me intrigued and maybe wanting to take it anyway. But that's me. <br /><br />-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-529542137381508012010-05-18T01:04:52.743-05:002010-05-18T01:04:52.743-05:00This is beautiful Pamela. Love this line - 'a ...This is beautiful Pamela. Love this line - 'a dark dissension into the depths of surrealism'.Uma Gowrishankarhttp://umaathreya.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67336627666557332272010-05-17T07:40:33.994-05:002010-05-17T07:40:33.994-05:00Greyscale,
Thanks for taking the time to comment o...Greyscale,<br />Thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-74049334790822613262010-05-17T04:56:33.451-05:002010-05-17T04:56:33.451-05:00The fact that the key is in the attic - the upper ...The fact that the key is in the attic - the upper living place, often small and cramped - is quite symbolic! A place for storage of cobwebs! An interesting piece of writing!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30153015393614752232010-05-16T22:46:41.908-05:002010-05-16T22:46:41.908-05:00Linda,
I remember that movie. Thanks for commenti...Linda, <br />I remember that movie. Thanks for commenting.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-42559175875439446862010-05-16T22:29:54.050-05:002010-05-16T22:29:54.050-05:00You poem reminds me of that movie...(have to go se...You poem reminds me of that movie...(have to go search)...yes! Skeleton Key with Kate Hudson. Not nice keys, not nice at alll...Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37377274893832455222010-05-16T21:14:50.447-05:002010-05-16T21:14:50.447-05:00Angie,
Thanks and I wouldn't open a box like t...Angie,<br />Thanks and I wouldn't open a box like that.<br />Thanks for the compliment.<br />Pamelsflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5905696438160260042010-05-16T21:13:32.588-05:002010-05-16T21:13:32.588-05:00Annie,
It is about poetic imagery. And thanks for ...Annie,<br />It is about poetic imagery. And thanks for commenting.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-53206110230207983962010-05-16T18:12:16.461-05:002010-05-16T18:12:16.461-05:00sometimes keys open boxes better left closed, don&...sometimes keys open boxes better left closed, don't they?<br /><br />wonderful piece, Pamela!angiehttp://another2doors.wordpress.com/2010/05/16/skeleton-key/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-42255051409907561872010-05-16T17:42:28.279-05:002010-05-16T17:42:28.279-05:00Definitely not a key I want to find. Keeping my f...Definitely not a key I want to find. Keeping my fingers crossed that this is all about poetic imagery otherwise, this is a key to a very dark rabbit hole.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-92060401054146437562010-05-16T14:36:13.403-05:002010-05-16T14:36:13.403-05:00Marianne,
It is a sad and tragic story of Poe and ...Marianne,<br />It is a sad and tragic story of Poe and his young wife. I think they were only married 2 years before she died of TB. He was the inspiration for me to write this.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15735677613046926952010-05-16T14:04:18.996-05:002010-05-16T14:04:18.996-05:00I was just reading about Poe and his young wife, V...I was just reading about Poe and his young wife, Virginia. A very sad story! Your poem is agreeably tragic and gloomy, Pamela!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34452617324608128792010-05-16T10:46:34.565-05:002010-05-16T10:46:34.565-05:00Janet,
Thanks for commenting.
PamelaJanet,<br />Thanks for commenting.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13678054679534798602010-05-16T10:46:01.250-05:002010-05-16T10:46:01.250-05:00Anthony,
Thanks and it is meant to be dark.
Pamela...Anthony,<br />Thanks and it is meant to be dark.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63279728327730427642010-05-16T09:02:52.881-05:002010-05-16T09:02:52.881-05:00mm hauntingmm hauntinglucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-87221673879669068092010-05-16T03:00:55.267-05:002010-05-16T03:00:55.267-05:00This was beautifully dark. Quite the key.This was beautifully dark. Quite the key.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28700025960464139172010-05-16T02:33:07.568-05:002010-05-16T02:33:07.568-05:00Marja,
I think I will. Thanks.
PamelaMarja,<br />I think I will. Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78891373273758206312010-05-16T01:09:48.419-05:002010-05-16T01:09:48.419-05:00Original but better keep the key in that beautiful...Original but better keep the key in that beautiful boxMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-79019515194913404172010-05-15T23:13:40.679-05:002010-05-15T23:13:40.679-05:00Robin,
Are you sure? It's free.
PamelaRobin,<br />Are you sure? It's free.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com