tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post6581572587362261521..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Surfing on the water's edge One Shot Wednesday #34Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41690235219520051692011-02-24T12:14:51.794-06:002011-02-24T12:14:51.794-06:00Thanks so much, Kavita.Thanks so much, Kavita.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62254156143181136112011-02-24T04:09:51.250-06:002011-02-24T04:09:51.250-06:00WOWW!! I heard the roar of the waves myself in you...WOWW!! I heard the roar of the waves myself in your words!! Awesome!! Felt fresh after reading this one, Pamela! It actually reminded me of the poem I had written about my skydiving experience and that sense of total freedom...woohoo!! <br />A really coooooool One Shot, my dear!! :)Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21442255874702670972011-02-23T22:15:36.594-06:002011-02-23T22:15:36.594-06:00Ouch! That had to have hurt. I crashed
several tim...Ouch! That had to have hurt. I crashed<br />several times, but with no reminders.<br />You are welcome.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7241648055784692852011-02-23T22:13:44.543-06:002011-02-23T22:13:44.543-06:00Ha ha ha! Eric, do they still use some
of those ex...Ha ha ha! Eric, do they still use some<br />of those expressions. I should ask my friend.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90948528695346768932011-02-23T22:12:27.728-06:002011-02-23T22:12:27.728-06:00I am glad you did, Joy Ann.
Thanks.I am glad you did, Joy Ann.<br />Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90121701496178073082011-02-23T22:10:39.478-06:002011-02-23T22:10:39.478-06:00Monty, I imagine that would true, but, give me the...Monty, I imagine that would true, but, give me the board anytime. Motorcycles terrify me.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25598977265257513612011-02-23T22:08:49.576-06:002011-02-23T22:08:49.576-06:00Thanks Shasi:)Thanks Shasi:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44588402383994319512011-02-23T22:07:42.002-06:002011-02-23T22:07:42.002-06:00I love the water, Susannah.I love the water, Susannah.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88776148489793646942011-02-23T22:07:05.146-06:002011-02-23T22:07:05.146-06:00As I remember it, Claudia.As I remember it, Claudia.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43710967482880534462011-02-23T22:06:22.796-06:002011-02-23T22:06:22.796-06:00Thanks Barb.Thanks Barb.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7695308464778956152011-02-23T22:05:40.628-06:002011-02-23T22:05:40.628-06:00rmp, I couldn't get into your site, hum?rmp, I couldn't get into your site, hum?flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7223323531394352242011-02-23T16:49:29.693-06:002011-02-23T16:49:29.693-06:00I still have scrape marks on my belly, worn with t...I still have scrape marks on my belly, worn with time, as I feel the tug of the cord on my ankle...thanks fot taking me back there...Beautiful imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65259511818567242752011-02-23T11:37:14.856-06:002011-02-23T11:37:14.856-06:00Surf's up! Hang ten! Kawabunga, dude!
(Some...Surf's up! Hang ten! Kawabunga, dude!<br /><br />(Somebody get me a Mai Tai! LOL!)<br /><br />Nice One Shot, Pamela!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72893692272328590452011-02-23T11:32:31.874-06:002011-02-23T11:32:31.874-06:00"I am hidden behind a bullet's race with ..."I am hidden behind a bullet's race with time..." great line, pamela. The journey poem is a mainstay, but you have given it life and flow and a sense of the ocean being alive both within and without. And the surfing metaphor is excellently done throughout. Enjoyed it.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20584420509256776782011-02-23T08:01:17.625-06:002011-02-23T08:01:17.625-06:00love the experience through your eyes. favorite l...love the experience through your eyes. favorite lines are the two "I am hidden. . ." similar feeling I get at 80 mph behind full fairing on HD :) nice oneshot<br /><br />Monty / bumMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17398754774594998722011-02-23T07:28:45.211-06:002011-02-23T07:28:45.211-06:00Beautiful.. I enjoyed it so much...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
O...Beautiful.. I enjoyed it so much...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-tanka-and-search-for-being.html<br />Connect with me at Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-57595513404880928182011-02-23T06:42:15.680-06:002011-02-23T06:42:15.680-06:00OOh, I can feel the surging water and sheer energy...OOh, I can feel the surging water and sheer energy of it through you words! Exhilarating. :-)Susannahhttp://outofmyocean.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18782458233618012842011-02-23T01:00:42.598-06:002011-02-23T01:00:42.598-06:00oh - i can feel the froth, splashing in your poem....oh - i can feel the froth, splashing in your poem..would love to surf...think it's a bit like flying..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-75090907212283918792011-02-23T00:01:57.419-06:002011-02-23T00:01:57.419-06:00I am hidden behind a bullet's race with time.....I am hidden behind a bullet's race with time....<br /><br />this is a poem within that is a message that goes beyond surfing....well done Pam....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-2670635885490434722011-02-22T21:28:06.372-06:002011-02-22T21:28:06.372-06:00If I closed my eyes, I could almost picture myself...If I closed my eyes, I could almost picture myself transported...impressive since I've never been near a board. Lovely image!rmpWritingshttps://dontopendontthrowaway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19661315606548369602011-02-22T20:47:37.259-06:002011-02-22T20:47:37.259-06:00It's never, too late, Gautami.It's never, too late, Gautami.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48408917195822073202011-02-22T20:06:14.146-06:002011-02-22T20:06:14.146-06:00Wanna do it!
captured memoriesWanna do it!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/02/captured-memories.html" rel="nofollow">captured memories</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-33604593416814413972011-02-22T19:36:18.037-06:002011-02-22T19:36:18.037-06:00I haven't gone since high school nor
have I ev...I haven't gone since high school nor<br />have I ever written about it. My best<br />friend in California, still goes all<br />the time.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18857092131882286222011-02-22T18:49:36.577-06:002011-02-22T18:49:36.577-06:00wow. i have never surfed but this is how i imagine...wow. i have never surfed but this is how i imagine it...riding the bullet...nice...i so want to try now...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com