tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post64566797487678572..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "tak and nie" big tent poetry #35-a poem with a foot or feet in itUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-87876905439967902792011-01-10T16:32:23.111-06:002011-01-10T16:32:23.111-06:00Thanks Brenda.
This prompt made me of the nursery ...Thanks Brenda.<br />This prompt made me of the nursery rhyme<br />"What is the ugliest part of your body?"<br />Though certainly did not go in that direction.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21027390702159520312011-01-09T22:43:41.574-06:002011-01-09T22:43:41.574-06:00To go or not to go, metric or moon, walking hither...To go or not to go, metric or moon, walking hither and thither, yes and no! Reminds me of a nursery rhyme. Lovely.Brenda Clewshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01400505552810078505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28173298148353244812011-01-09T12:22:14.435-06:002011-01-09T12:22:14.435-06:00Robin, I liked how you used "hands" in y...Robin, I liked how you used "hands" in your poem.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65003070550998035452011-01-09T12:01:39.214-06:002011-01-09T12:01:39.214-06:00Pamela, this has a dream-like quality, clear as an...Pamela, this has a dream-like quality, clear as an outline and yet hidden. I love the tension that creates.Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62760860683740876492011-01-08T18:22:29.300-06:002011-01-08T18:22:29.300-06:00Susan, I really appreciate that.
PamelaSusan, I really appreciate that.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29965371504678857232011-01-08T16:42:49.142-06:002011-01-08T16:42:49.142-06:00I like the easy flow between solid and ephemeral, ...I like the easy flow between solid and ephemeral, between the real and surreal - nice piece.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32882269961515878322011-01-08T14:05:07.844-06:002011-01-08T14:05:07.844-06:00Gautami, I am happy for that:)
PamelaGautami, I am happy for that:)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13155492606767970202011-01-08T14:04:24.436-06:002011-01-08T14:04:24.436-06:00Elizabeth, that is a really nice thing to say.
Pam...Elizabeth, that is a really nice thing to say.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83930287619425206982011-01-08T14:03:12.711-06:002011-01-08T14:03:12.711-06:00nan, thanks for the comment.
Pamelanan, thanks for the comment.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-2612281254035265232011-01-08T14:02:35.213-06:002011-01-08T14:02:35.213-06:00Irene, I am glad you think so:)
PamelaIrene, I am glad you think so:)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52628622909341184262011-01-08T09:50:35.060-06:002011-01-08T09:50:35.060-06:00It touched me.
I write notes here...It touched me. <br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/01/i-write-notes-here.html" rel="nofollow">I write notes here...</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-79127877175141840252011-01-08T07:38:13.065-06:002011-01-08T07:38:13.065-06:00Melancholy take on shadows and shadowing. . .Melancholy take on shadows and shadowing. . .nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65878684564763141902011-01-08T07:23:51.871-06:002011-01-08T07:23:51.871-06:00I think this is one of those poems you get (at lea...I think this is one of those poems you get (at least in part) before you understand it, which means it's very good.EKSwitajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17970124197156493214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83690515733059766302011-01-07T23:38:03.051-06:002011-01-07T23:38:03.051-06:00I think the bit about the moon seem to hold the se...I think the bit about the moon seem to hold the sense. Whimsical write.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18749313933337649902011-01-07T22:59:58.226-06:002011-01-07T22:59:58.226-06:00Mary, I know where you are coming from. But I was ...Mary, I know where you are coming from. But I was trying to get too literal with it. I approach life pretty much with one foot in front of the other, but I can't say I have always been that way. I also hope the moon never dies.<br />Thanks for being here,<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51148196148145682412011-01-07T22:50:57.949-06:002011-01-07T22:50:57.949-06:00Pamela, I found the subject an 'easy' one,...Pamela, I found the subject an 'easy' one, but I wrote about it so many times this past month that I didn't know if I would find anything else to say. I don't think obscurity outlines you at all, by the way..and I hope the moon NEVER dies. Well written poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-89543478124673313192011-01-07T20:21:31.512-06:002011-01-07T20:21:31.512-06:00Amanda, yeah and I am not Polish. I have been watc...Amanda, yeah and I am not Polish. I have been watching "Shoah" for a second time and it is leaving quite an impression on me (again). Watching it later in my life has led me to take a much deeper look at the whole situation. The Polish were very cold and the language is very abrupt. Thanks for the nice comment.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-27644612807886051472011-01-07T20:14:08.543-06:002011-01-07T20:14:08.543-06:00Donna,like Viv said I think this poem is obscure. ...Donna,like Viv said I think this poem is obscure. But part of that comes from me trying to force the prompt. I am fairly satisfied with the outcome.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38159674191864600362011-01-07T19:30:49.978-06:002011-01-07T19:30:49.978-06:00Thanks for the lesson in Polish! I would never kno...Thanks for the lesson in Polish! I would never know by your writing this was a tough subject it has such a whimsical feeling I loved it!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11791304743815423892011-01-07T18:46:32.914-06:002011-01-07T18:46:32.914-06:00I love the image that we need to lay out the meter...I love the image that we need to lay out the meters to have feet - first it seems nonsensical, but then "have feet" could have two readings. It could refer to movement.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49715218556915368972011-01-07T16:39:48.419-06:002011-01-07T16:39:48.419-06:00Linda, that is very true. As close as we feel to a...Linda, that is very true. As close as we feel to another human, there is essentially a detachment that exists.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44000293518739090642011-01-07T15:09:29.033-06:002011-01-07T15:09:29.033-06:00I like obscurity outlining the narrator of the poe...I like obscurity outlining the narrator of the poem.it's like an existential statement of our world where too often people exist isolatedfrom one another.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38769181064461723412011-01-07T12:06:12.135-06:002011-01-07T12:06:12.135-06:00I hate when I lose track of the moon:)
Thanks for ...I hate when I lose track of the moon:)<br />Thanks for the visit.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67812917751633396442011-01-07T12:04:40.106-06:002011-01-07T12:04:40.106-06:00Annell thanks and yours was an enjoyable read as w...Annell thanks and yours was an enjoyable read as well.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36344049987471579872011-01-07T12:03:54.037-06:002011-01-07T12:03:54.037-06:00Elizabeth that is a huge compliment. I was daunted...Elizabeth that is a huge compliment. I was daunted by this prompt. Maybe trying to hard and finally I just let the words flow.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.com