tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post5845646452049801375..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: nature, life, a dead woman big tent poetry #33 - dead man poetryUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54977466540423201532010-12-20T16:51:22.728-06:002010-12-20T16:51:22.728-06:00Hello my friend James.
I hope all is well with you...Hello my friend James.<br />I hope all is well with you.<br />Wishing you a wonderful holiday season.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70363556496309422352010-12-20T16:17:57.032-06:002010-12-20T16:17:57.032-06:00I like the first person and how it really reinforc...I like the first person and how it really reinforces this fleeting moment, one last chance to savor before moving on.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65126598430920572902010-12-20T12:53:12.128-06:002010-12-20T12:53:12.128-06:00Thanks Tilly.
Happy holidays to you and your famil...Thanks Tilly.<br />Happy holidays to you and your family.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80200103030631541812010-12-20T03:15:03.790-06:002010-12-20T03:15:03.790-06:00So much is contained in that image of the seconds ...So much is contained in that image of the seconds moving backwards.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62667837690383978932010-12-19T13:39:36.667-06:002010-12-19T13:39:36.667-06:00Thanks to all of you for the very nice comments.
I...Thanks to all of you for the very nice comments.<br />I am wishing everyone of you a very happy holiday.<br />May peace and love fill your lives.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50992352936440466492010-12-18T20:21:39.645-06:002010-12-18T20:21:39.645-06:00Beautiful, Pamela!Beautiful, Pamela!Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66401053224041082862010-12-18T14:16:33.653-06:002010-12-18T14:16:33.653-06:00Super! I especially liked the first stanza. The na...Super! I especially liked the first stanza. The named hummingbird, the muslin, the youth.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7816164608889346332010-12-18T14:09:34.613-06:002010-12-18T14:09:34.613-06:00this is very good Pam...really enjoyed reading thi...this is very good Pam...really enjoyed reading this.....thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13950306130470277132010-12-18T10:13:23.384-06:002010-12-18T10:13:23.384-06:00Beautiful and lyrical. I love the reflection on ti...Beautiful and lyrical. I love the reflection on time in the last stanza.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54910221067662600422010-12-18T09:49:50.206-06:002010-12-18T09:49:50.206-06:00I loved the entire piece, but the first three line...I loved the entire piece, but the first three lines of the second stanza are a world unto themselves...amazing!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84850604968386322092010-12-18T08:56:33.840-06:002010-12-18T08:56:33.840-06:00so much sweetness and beauty in this!so much sweetness and beauty in this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66012086459252402222010-12-18T08:28:42.408-06:002010-12-18T08:28:42.408-06:00This has a stateliness to it that I find compellin...This has a stateliness to it that I find compelling. It is like one of those small films you sometimes run across.Barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31620157037751983922010-12-18T06:28:29.544-06:002010-12-18T06:28:29.544-06:00Wonderful. I love the seconds moving backwards.Wonderful. I love the seconds moving backwards.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24749025729815868382010-12-17T22:06:27.007-06:002010-12-17T22:06:27.007-06:00This is exquisite. I think I'm mustering up th...This is exquisite. I think I'm mustering up the courage to try the form. Really enjoyed your imagery and the fact that, as tumblewords put it, it was so accessible.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39364498132946330172010-12-17T20:48:35.180-06:002010-12-17T20:48:35.180-06:00Impressive piece. A wonderful read, evocative and ...Impressive piece. A wonderful read, evocative and accessible. I love it.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64433468149434950792010-12-17T17:27:19.733-06:002010-12-17T17:27:19.733-06:00Really like what you have done, Pamela. You moved ...Really like what you have done, Pamela. You moved the form to a higher level and made it far more approachable somehow. Love your choice of words and images. Brava!<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81965148482132762532010-12-17T13:29:18.976-06:002010-12-17T13:29:18.976-06:00I especially liked these lines:
I count the second...I especially liked these lines:<br />I count the seconds on my wristwatch.<br />It seems they are moving backwards, so<br />I may wait a little longer. <br /><br />Wonderful poem.lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34446038672022539912010-12-17T12:46:41.280-06:002010-12-17T12:46:41.280-06:00I especially love the second stanza of Part One. T...I especially love the second stanza of Part One. The image will not leave my brain - lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82102005379470986452010-12-17T10:59:10.993-06:002010-12-17T10:59:10.993-06:00"...All juvenility is
replaced with worn out ..."...All juvenility is<br />replaced with worn out memories. But<br />the colourful birds still entrance me."<br /><br />A lovely and moving piece. Makes the whole prompt worthwhile for me. My dead man also had a watch, but not with such pleasant results.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50502866932401055282010-12-17T10:42:52.874-06:002010-12-17T10:42:52.874-06:00Pamela--Wow! This piece moves me deeply. It's...Pamela--Wow! This piece moves me deeply. It's nice to be back in the circuit and have time to enjoy your work. This evokes sadness and hope in me. Well done, extremely. From hummingbird to muslin cloth to crown of thorns, I am impressed with your work. Thanks--Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45649492130257808632010-12-17T10:05:42.253-06:002010-12-17T10:05:42.253-06:00The "I have draped my skin in muslin cloth&qu...The "I have draped my skin in muslin cloth" just got to me. Wow.<br /><br />Such a rooted, soulful quality, Pamela. I enjoyed your words immensely.<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/12/dead-woman-poem-2-prompted-thanks-to-big-tent-poetry.html" rel="nofollow"> My Poem for the week. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5801272165267110412010-12-17T09:23:58.394-06:002010-12-17T09:23:58.394-06:00An amazing piece of inspiration...An amazing piece of inspiration...markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18437123644788152922010-12-17T08:38:37.176-06:002010-12-17T08:38:37.176-06:00I am in awe. Those are marvellous!
dead man and h...I am in awe. Those are marvellous!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/12/dead-man-and-his-shoe-painting.html" rel="nofollow">dead man and his shoe painting</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20463060030677811832010-12-17T08:22:51.648-06:002010-12-17T08:22:51.648-06:00Adoro la naturaleza. La transición entre una vista...Adoro la naturaleza. La transición entre una vista por la vida y la muerte del mundo natural está muy bien hecho. Me gusta este poema mucho. Deseo para ustedes un muy Feliz Navidad.<br />Un cordial saludo,<br />DonDonald Harbourhttp://woodennickel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54961337061721938102010-12-17T04:46:09.518-06:002010-12-17T04:46:09.518-06:00Your poems are so different from others to this pr...Your poems are so different from others to this prompt, and made me realise how shallowly I had thought about it. I like these very much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com