tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post5672982070857664771..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Everywhere I Turn poets united thursday think tank #35-shadowsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70939875706730587582011-02-12T15:53:21.920-06:002011-02-12T15:53:21.920-06:00Thanks much, Barb.Thanks much, Barb.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6850542065506272282011-02-12T15:52:48.393-06:002011-02-12T15:52:48.393-06:00Thanks Ella:)Thanks Ella:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65115423382040013222011-02-12T15:52:15.715-06:002011-02-12T15:52:15.715-06:00Thanks, Eileen the same to you.Thanks, Eileen the same to you.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26960184886161288272011-02-12T15:51:23.137-06:002011-02-12T15:51:23.137-06:00Thanks for the visit Deborah.Thanks for the visit Deborah.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1737591743863839812011-02-12T15:50:52.538-06:002011-02-12T15:50:52.538-06:00We do indeed, Elizabeth.We do indeed, Elizabeth.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84755831575739840342011-02-12T15:50:04.142-06:002011-02-12T15:50:04.142-06:00Thanks Peggy, I guess I succeeded.Thanks Peggy, I guess I succeeded.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64067414310388121262011-02-12T15:49:22.645-06:002011-02-12T15:49:22.645-06:00Very true Mary.
There is no escape.Very true Mary.<br />There is no escape.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32986598874815330942011-02-12T15:48:42.254-06:002011-02-12T15:48:42.254-06:00Thanks Philip.Thanks Philip.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44672393229560944962011-02-12T15:48:12.020-06:002011-02-12T15:48:12.020-06:00It is a bit, Ollie;)It is a bit, Ollie;)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18648690436401823832011-02-12T15:46:49.367-06:002011-02-12T15:46:49.367-06:00No problem Susannah:)No problem Susannah:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45006937524917447802011-02-11T19:26:09.544-06:002011-02-11T19:26:09.544-06:00Thanks Sherry:)Thanks Sherry:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55746232345609189032011-02-11T14:02:25.427-06:002011-02-11T14:02:25.427-06:00Fantastic Pam....love the "night falls over m...Fantastic Pam....love the "night falls over me like a sheet of clay" you make the shadows come alive....nice..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69438760634622361552011-02-11T11:06:11.624-06:002011-02-11T11:06:11.624-06:00This had such a dark feel, the cold, chasing, loom...This had such a dark feel, the cold, chasing, looming shadow! Very well guided,alluding us to continue following your words, like a shadow!<br />Well Done...I love the line,"On brick walls, segmented,shifting"!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65377402896027379882011-02-11T10:14:55.964-06:002011-02-11T10:14:55.964-06:00Pamela,
I really enjoyed your walk with and by the...Pamela,<br />I really enjoyed your walk with and by the shadows.<br />Beautiful words.......<br /><br />Best Regards,<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43196033139691246642011-02-11T03:06:10.629-06:002011-02-11T03:06:10.629-06:00I walked with you here, wonderful imagery.I walked with you here, wonderful imagery.Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35444537827474136032011-02-10T23:38:33.841-06:002011-02-10T23:38:33.841-06:00Another vivid and thoughtful piece of writing, Pam...Another vivid and thoughtful piece of writing, Pamela. Love the images that have you reaching for and trying to somehow grasp those shadows. We all do that in one form or another.<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/10/1842/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52035680548238453652011-02-10T21:17:47.259-06:002011-02-10T21:17:47.259-06:00I got a definite feeling of coldness and shadow fr...I got a definite feeling of coldness and shadow from this. And then that damp sheet of clay! Good work!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50282058080316222382011-02-10T20:55:28.397-06:002011-02-10T20:55:28.397-06:00One cannot escape one's shadow self no matter ...One cannot escape one's shadow self no matter how hard one might try. Well expressed poem, Pam.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54911155409594042942011-02-10T16:28:31.365-06:002011-02-10T16:28:31.365-06:00Does a shadow follow me, or do I follow it? I love...Does a shadow follow me, or do I follow it? I love the cleverness of this poem.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19544412667336073992011-02-10T15:55:42.940-06:002011-02-10T15:55:42.940-06:00I enjoyed this narrative...spooky.I enjoyed this narrative...spooky.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65791245269310200752011-02-10T14:16:05.606-06:002011-02-10T14:16:05.606-06:00I love the imagery here, the elongated shapes in p...I love the imagery here, the elongated shapes in poorly lit alleyways and segmented and shifting on bricks walls. I could see it! :-)<br /><br />Thanks for the pictures your words bought. :-)Susannahhttp://outofmyocean.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43604482988093192982011-02-10T13:23:08.959-06:002011-02-10T13:23:08.959-06:00I love it! These shadows walk a lot of miles with ...I love it! These shadows walk a lot of miles with us. (As I said to one of the other poets, I wonder why my shadow isnt thinner:) ) I love the line "as the night falls over me like a sheet of clay" - great line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com