tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post4514457463235728340..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: hole in your soul day #19 november PAD chapbook challenge-a holeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81415563247024246342010-11-22T10:58:37.007-06:002010-11-22T10:58:37.007-06:00Diane,
Yeah, it would be a nasty way to live.
Pame...Diane,<br />Yeah, it would be a nasty way to live.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41128344485695276642010-11-22T10:57:57.256-06:002010-11-22T10:57:57.256-06:00Mary,
I guess I did well in describing the scenari...Mary,<br />I guess I did well in describing the scenario.<br />Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-85022706618883666772010-11-22T07:35:01.805-06:002010-11-22T07:35:01.805-06:00Ick, Pamela! Well described!Ick, Pamela! Well described!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-33837227847331418992010-11-22T07:16:50.811-06:002010-11-22T07:16:50.811-06:00Wow, Pamela. What a description! You wrote so st...Wow, Pamela. What a description! You wrote so strongly of a certain kind of life that I almost gagged on what my mind saw and smelled!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71117326094124550232010-11-20T11:07:05.041-06:002010-11-20T11:07:05.041-06:00Thanks Jingle. I have been off of work for the pas...Thanks Jingle. I have been off of work for the past few days. So I have had time for myself and writing.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81216075339484786152010-11-19T20:03:36.943-06:002010-11-19T20:03:36.943-06:00I simply admire your energy in writing so many lov...I simply admire your energy in writing so many lovely poems within a short period of time.<br /><br />amazing gaping hole of life.<br />well done.Jinglenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-85182939857585003232010-11-19T18:34:28.332-06:002010-11-19T18:34:28.332-06:00Sherry,
Thanks and I was thinking when we got this...Sherry,<br />Thanks and I was thinking when we got this prompt over at PA, what would cause a hole. I thought imagine living on skid row with no hope of changing or wanting to. Well, that is where this came from. <br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5837359876607958642010-11-19T18:20:38.006-06:002010-11-19T18:20:38.006-06:00Very descriptive of this way of life - very accura...Very descriptive of this way of life - very accurate portrayal and the mood seeps through the poem. Well done. I could almost smell the cigarette butts:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com