tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post3908746640348200930..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Windows Change Lives" NaPoWriMo #8 - a broken windowUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger58125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91038820791396582332011-04-12T21:55:11.444-05:002011-04-12T21:55:11.444-05:00No, Jeanne, I've never written about him befor...No, Jeanne, I've never written about him before.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31592526025856211842011-04-12T21:31:02.537-05:002011-04-12T21:31:02.537-05:00Did we meet pieces of him in another poem of yours...Did we meet pieces of him in another poem of yours I've read? This was very good...honest and hard hitting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40367302798803579182011-04-10T21:21:22.365-05:002011-04-10T21:21:22.365-05:00Thanks Cathy!Thanks Cathy!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77519635834581018182011-04-10T21:20:58.421-05:002011-04-10T21:20:58.421-05:00Thanks Mary, I have wanted to write about it befor...Thanks Mary, I have wanted to write about it before, but could never find the correct words.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52501306616862893692011-04-10T21:19:07.288-05:002011-04-10T21:19:07.288-05:00Appreciated Judy.Appreciated Judy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82954200335518068532011-04-10T21:18:23.905-05:002011-04-10T21:18:23.905-05:00Thanks Susan:)Thanks Susan:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-38264371762788426482011-04-10T21:17:56.256-05:002011-04-10T21:17:56.256-05:00Thanks my friend Sherry:)Thanks my friend Sherry:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72836123568441069132011-04-10T21:17:15.779-05:002011-04-10T21:17:15.779-05:00It was that, nan.It was that, nan.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30079040215042679402011-04-10T21:16:48.999-05:002011-04-10T21:16:48.999-05:00Thanks DJ:)Thanks DJ:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68259853802979282422011-04-10T13:17:19.435-05:002011-04-10T13:17:19.435-05:00One very powerful poem!One very powerful poem!Cathyhttp://www.thequietone.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58935910737223141612011-04-09T19:36:41.698-05:002011-04-09T19:36:41.698-05:00Oh, Pamela. the scene came alive before my eyes. ...Oh, Pamela. the scene came alive before my eyes. A chilling nightmarish masterpiece. Whew, this piece makes my heart beat fast! I can just feel 'fist through glass.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55212532376422901502011-04-09T07:05:52.399-05:002011-04-09T07:05:52.399-05:00What a hard hitting piece of work. Your poem brin...What a hard hitting piece of work. Your poem brings the event to life but also the impact besides the physical injuries.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55668889145859002992011-04-08T21:50:32.353-05:002011-04-08T21:50:32.353-05:00Powerful piece of writing - vivid imagery!Powerful piece of writing - vivid imagery!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-57188581662637698572011-04-08T20:27:05.780-05:002011-04-08T20:27:05.780-05:00Strong and heartfelt writing. Well done, Pamela.Strong and heartfelt writing. Well done, Pamela.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70481196551946679242011-04-08T20:26:50.012-05:002011-04-08T20:26:50.012-05:00wow - great, great poem! Would you believe I almos...wow - great, great poem! Would you believe I almost wrote a poem about someone close to me who put his arm through a window in a time of great anxiety and upset? I just couldn't gather it. You did a great job here. I hope it was cathartic.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60135977474102992312011-04-08T20:26:00.126-05:002011-04-08T20:26:00.126-05:00I liked the "fortress of splintered slivers&q...I liked the "fortress of splintered slivers" very much.DJ Vorreyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02166957214456197239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62706386390619449212011-04-08T19:22:52.827-05:002011-04-08T19:22:52.827-05:00I suppose they do, zouxzoux. Thanks.I suppose they do, zouxzoux. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-4456058774439640812011-04-08T19:21:48.152-05:002011-04-08T19:21:48.152-05:00Oh, Amy, thanks for the smile with your poem.Oh, Amy, thanks for the smile with your poem.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-6091404843242604372011-04-08T19:20:46.832-05:002011-04-08T19:20:46.832-05:00Thanks Linda:)Thanks Linda:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16880078892430130762011-04-08T18:54:13.023-05:002011-04-08T18:54:13.023-05:00Real experiences make the best poetry. Well done!Real experiences make the best poetry. Well done!Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65162713384289898322011-04-08T18:45:33.006-05:002011-04-08T18:45:33.006-05:00Pamela, I am speechless. This came alive before m...Pamela, I am speechless. This came alive before my eyes. You truly captured the event in all its horror, as well as the emotional aftermath. Brava! Amy<br />...and here is something silly, in case you need a smile:<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/08/you-said-it/Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00546103899091072370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70947011370930537532011-04-08T18:26:06.511-05:002011-04-08T18:26:06.511-05:00A powerful and evocative pieceA powerful and evocative pieceLindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66631639909558092282011-04-08T18:08:54.343-05:002011-04-08T18:08:54.343-05:00Thanks, Madeleine.Thanks, Madeleine.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32425343214693835972011-04-08T18:08:33.244-05:002011-04-08T18:08:33.244-05:00They do that, Brenda, thanks.They do that, Brenda, thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-33070320172537265372011-04-08T17:59:13.502-05:002011-04-08T17:59:13.502-05:00Wow! Very powerful and evocative.Wow! Very powerful and evocative.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.com