tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post3886672021623285870..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Run My Hands Along The River" NaPoWriMo #21Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62793443949960859022011-04-26T13:12:35.362-05:002011-04-26T13:12:35.362-05:00Thanks Janet:)Thanks Janet:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23756784161771950532011-04-22T20:00:09.688-05:002011-04-22T20:00:09.688-05:00challenging prompt and
thoughtful imagerychallenging prompt and<br />thoughtful imagerylucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35050249773083167892011-04-22T11:18:59.769-05:002011-04-22T11:18:59.769-05:00Elizabeth, what a really nice thing to say. Intere...Elizabeth, what a really nice thing to say. Interesting you liked on the first read, not knowing what it was about. I like that.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16483664522965790832011-04-22T11:17:39.256-05:002011-04-22T11:17:39.256-05:00Thanks Gloria, I suppose it could've sat alone...Thanks Gloria, I suppose it could've sat alone without the notes or maybe not.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52472279466862064082011-04-22T11:16:10.743-05:002011-04-22T11:16:10.743-05:00That bit is about Melissa, and I felt/feel exactly...That bit is about Melissa, and I felt/feel exactly that way, Mary. This wasn't an easy prompt, but I am glad I did it.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16666840675855187892011-04-21T23:32:32.360-05:002011-04-21T23:32:32.360-05:00First read, I caught all kinds of meaning and thou...First read, I caught all kinds of meaning and thought I understood. Then read the explanation and thought, "Wow! You got this from that?" Then went back and read it a second time. Still like what I caught the first time around. As always, your use of language makes me drool, wonderful writing,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-156771551068742472011-04-21T21:21:28.434-05:002011-04-21T21:21:28.434-05:00Jeeze, I usually jump at challenges, but I think I...Jeeze, I usually jump at challenges, but I think I would jump away from this one....hmmm..<br />When I read through it the first time, I thought it was very poetic, but I didn't get it. Then I read your notes (thanks for including the notes), and went back to the poem All I can say is Well Done!!!Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-85730096186769637062011-04-21T21:07:38.361-05:002011-04-21T21:07:38.361-05:00Excellent poem in response to a difficult prompt, ...Excellent poem in response to a difficult prompt, Pam. I admire you for tackling it...I like 'wrapped in a blanket of joy...' It warms me!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61166230806112367602011-04-21T20:54:04.282-05:002011-04-21T20:54:04.282-05:00Thanks Andy, this could use some revision, some ti...Thanks Andy, this could use some revision, some time in the future.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24939005166461375332011-04-21T16:54:44.726-05:002011-04-21T16:54:44.726-05:00Nicely done! I enjoyed reading the poem then I rea...Nicely done! I enjoyed reading the poem then I read the back story and realised how complicated it was. Very well done!!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23033489532766942892011-04-21T11:42:52.199-05:002011-04-21T11:42:52.199-05:00Thanks so much, Barb.Thanks so much, Barb.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44257213328926214862011-04-21T11:42:15.529-05:002011-04-21T11:42:15.529-05:00Marianne, you always have something nice to say. I...Marianne, you always have something nice to say. I appreciate that:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48886536996676686152011-04-21T11:41:25.982-05:002011-04-21T11:41:25.982-05:00I can't help you with that, Jinksy:)I can't help you with that, Jinksy:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-55393493116595480662011-04-21T11:40:50.449-05:002011-04-21T11:40:50.449-05:00Thanks Dave.Thanks Dave.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-86808241194192884752011-04-21T11:39:47.527-05:002011-04-21T11:39:47.527-05:00The most difficult thing for me is the title, Bren...The most difficult thing for me is the title, Brenda. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77898412536464378112011-04-21T11:38:46.403-05:002011-04-21T11:38:46.403-05:00Nice compliment, Tilly, thanks.Nice compliment, Tilly, thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-25091564284608208122011-04-21T11:37:54.759-05:002011-04-21T11:37:54.759-05:00That's the beauty of it, Ron, you don't ha...That's the beauty of it, Ron, you don't have to:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39805989971665735722011-04-21T11:36:57.940-05:002011-04-21T11:36:57.940-05:00I know, M.A.S.I know, M.A.S.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52160615667486146692011-04-21T11:36:28.032-05:002011-04-21T11:36:28.032-05:00No regrets about the good things, Stan, but hard t...No regrets about the good things, Stan, but hard to convey it with the bad.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23434112301830942952011-04-21T11:35:09.977-05:002011-04-21T11:35:09.977-05:00Thanks Viv, not an easy prompt, but easier than a ...Thanks Viv, not an easy prompt, but easier than a ghazal:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-10047814564526465642011-04-21T10:50:07.627-05:002011-04-21T10:50:07.627-05:00Pam, What an excellent piece of writing encompassi...Pam, What an excellent piece of writing encompassing thoughts and life and times...can feel the life changing form from stanza to stanza....and difficult prompt that you mastered extremely well here..bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-47945871740193414562011-04-21T09:30:45.123-05:002011-04-21T09:30:45.123-05:00Amazing response to a difficult challenge. I love ...Amazing response to a difficult challenge. I love your work, Pamela. Your words are always juicy and luscious. This is especially notable: "resting easy on strands of brilliant stars bursting before me."Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19478284615750682452011-04-21T08:51:10.349-05:002011-04-21T08:51:10.349-05:00I'm lost...I'm lost...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-31833480887793814562011-04-21T08:01:01.621-05:002011-04-21T08:01:01.621-05:00Memory, a rich source of imagery. You mine it well...Memory, a rich source of imagery. You mine it well.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61390134380222412802011-04-21T07:56:12.003-05:002011-04-21T07:56:12.003-05:00You had me at the title. This is an interesting pi...You had me at the title. This is an interesting piece, Pamela. All of your poems urge me to read them again. Your language use strikes lush imagery. <br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.com