tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post3403055190535802715..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: After the Rain poetry tow truck #11-repeat yourselfUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21415109458768818552011-03-13T17:06:48.435-06:002011-03-13T17:06:48.435-06:00Viv, you are much too kind:)
I feel like I didn...Viv, you are much too kind:)<br />I feel like I didn't complete<br />this prompt successfully.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-87049977627095373282011-03-13T17:03:46.077-06:002011-03-13T17:03:46.077-06:00Pamela, this really works - the repetition is like...Pamela, this really works - the repetition is like a mantra drumming into my brain!vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-42336338894156379852011-03-13T12:04:55.742-06:002011-03-13T12:04:55.742-06:00Thanks, Dick, it comes from a prompt by Donna V.,
...Thanks, Dick, it comes from a prompt by Donna V.,<br />which, I had some difficulty with. It is using<br />anaphora, I must try doing this again, sometime.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40594246899283673162011-03-13T11:52:14.780-06:002011-03-13T11:52:14.780-06:00The sense of anguish and anger is brought across v...The sense of anguish and anger is brought across very effectively by the chanting repetition. A piece to read aloud.Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84567708421444099392011-03-12T17:15:16.027-06:002011-03-12T17:15:16.027-06:00Thanks much, Ben.Thanks much, Ben.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40877853266844638772011-03-12T16:17:06.618-06:002011-03-12T16:17:06.618-06:00I love the solemn reminiscing. Lots of emotion in...I love the solemn reminiscing. Lots of emotion in this poem. Very nicely written.Benhttp://planb-publishing.com/AuthorsBlognoreply@blogger.com