tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2957390349277600132..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Comets' Tails" A Wordling Whirl of Sundays #6- Wallace StevensUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40234760439355785022011-06-03T21:20:04.108-05:002011-06-03T21:20:04.108-05:00As always, beautiful done.As always, beautiful done.Cathyhttp://thequietone.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41599941312150920502011-06-02T16:44:00.553-05:002011-06-02T16:44:00.553-05:00I keep meaning to ask you: is the photo at the top...I keep meaning to ask you: is the photo at the top of your blog you? I so hope it is; I always think of you like that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12703094221705878872011-06-01T00:28:57.286-05:002011-06-01T00:28:57.286-05:00Pamela, a sad portrait, to not even enjoy play. It...Pamela, a sad portrait, to not even enjoy play. It's a little dark, but hard to not go there with those wordle words.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22404303786745015932011-05-31T15:29:23.597-05:002011-05-31T15:29:23.597-05:00You threw me a curve on the first line of the last...You threw me a curve on the first line of the last stanza. I thought you would repeat a modification of the first lines of the first stanzas, but your ending kept the dark mood. I really like this.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64974244982479308752011-05-31T11:06:24.665-05:002011-05-31T11:06:24.665-05:00That's a great opening line, and the imagery i...That's a great opening line, and the imagery it takes us through afterward is superb.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-71542397929660664352011-05-30T16:19:04.609-05:002011-05-30T16:19:04.609-05:00Nicely done piece, Pamela! To be able to look at o...Nicely done piece, Pamela! To be able to look at oneself as though not oneself, an interesting idea, indeed.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-604481764423132212011-05-30T14:57:06.039-05:002011-05-30T14:57:06.039-05:00Beautifully written and beautiful use of the wordl...Beautifully written and beautiful use of the wordle words, Pamela! Each stanza is perfect and flows effortlessly into the next!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-4567295324954165052011-05-30T13:38:29.122-05:002011-05-30T13:38:29.122-05:00I'll be sure to let her know, Traci;)
Thanks.I'll be sure to let her know, Traci;)<br />Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70152411755854716482011-05-30T12:24:26.212-05:002011-05-30T12:24:26.212-05:00It's interesting to me how we're all inter...It's interesting to me how we're all interacting with the wordle this week - how a set of themes is emerging and we're all falling into one or the other without having read each other's pieces(at least in my case) before writing our own.<br /><br />Wonderful character study, Pamela! I want to tell your woman to let go and let herself feel something before she turns to stone.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-80152263469787420352011-05-30T11:16:01.178-05:002011-05-30T11:16:01.178-05:00Autobiographical? Not exactly, Viv, but I am sure ...Autobiographical? Not exactly, Viv, but I am sure I could fit in at least one of those character definitions. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78715105034312676272011-05-30T11:14:36.334-05:002011-05-30T11:14:36.334-05:00Fiducia thank you. I liked your granddad poem very...Fiducia thank you. I liked your granddad poem very much.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20473325779567158792011-05-30T11:13:45.591-05:002011-05-30T11:13:45.591-05:00Thanks Hank. You should join us.Thanks Hank. You should join us.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-7241586822444947482011-05-30T11:13:10.890-05:002011-05-30T11:13:10.890-05:00Life can be sad sometimes, Janet.Life can be sad sometimes, Janet.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43315044781513273992011-05-30T11:12:37.358-05:002011-05-30T11:12:37.358-05:00Thanks Dave.Thanks Dave.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45241342453510982462011-05-30T11:12:12.387-05:002011-05-30T11:12:12.387-05:00Thanks Tilly.Thanks Tilly.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60805518850967217762011-05-30T11:11:46.947-05:002011-05-30T11:11:46.947-05:00I look forward to your poem, Amy.I look forward to your poem, Amy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63196576599976717082011-05-30T11:11:07.310-05:002011-05-30T11:11:07.310-05:00Thanks Henry, much appreciated.Thanks Henry, much appreciated.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72202857425642701252011-05-30T11:10:34.924-05:002011-05-30T11:10:34.924-05:00Thanks Irene.Thanks Irene.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20893619645609878622011-05-30T07:55:11.383-05:002011-05-30T07:55:11.383-05:00There are so many great lines in this, Pamela, tha...There are so many great lines in this, Pamela, that it's hard to pick a favourite, but I think " she’s too afraid of turning into something dismal" says a lot about her/you?<br /><br />These wordles of Brenda's are bringing out some exceptional poems.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-92190370043601532572011-05-30T07:45:06.922-05:002011-05-30T07:45:06.922-05:00'She has become a surrogate in someone else’s ...'She has become a surrogate in someone else’s play'...<br />How did you even think of ending it like that? Beautiful, great talent you have here!<br />Love this challenge and each time as to how you tackle it with the best choice of words..!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15460928529819956482011-05-30T06:25:41.157-05:002011-05-30T06:25:41.157-05:00Pamela,
The wordle, yes, the wordle. It flows natu...Pamela,<br />The wordle, yes, the wordle. It flows naturally.kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-22395490240657093152011-05-30T06:07:07.643-05:002011-05-30T06:07:07.643-05:00achy sad pam =)achy sad pam =)lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-53817423902624846362011-05-30T05:20:06.239-05:002011-05-30T05:20:06.239-05:00Clever use of the wordle. I particularly liked the...Clever use of the wordle. I particularly liked the second stanza.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-85705985259789834752011-05-30T02:49:19.802-05:002011-05-30T02:49:19.802-05:00I love the strong characterization in this poem, P...I love the strong characterization in this poem, Pamela.<br /><br />Great closing lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-57644924777677976572011-05-30T00:20:05.664-05:002011-05-30T00:20:05.664-05:00Pamela, I had written on Brenda's wordle as we...Pamela, I had written on Brenda's wordle as well, on a totally different subject. Great set of words, and you used them well. "She doesn't cry when she needs to" is my favorite line from this, as I know a young person who needs to cry but cannot bring herself to do it... thanks so much! I'll post mine tomorrow, but in the meantime...<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/29/women-woman-2/ Peace, AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com