tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post294734780527785052..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: My fear we write poems #14 a list poemUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32246094870732344052010-08-13T22:42:21.806-05:002010-08-13T22:42:21.806-05:00Thanks Jingle have a nice weekend!
PamelaThanks Jingle have a nice weekend!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-82496817005901318922010-08-13T20:57:19.979-05:002010-08-13T20:57:19.979-05:00u r so very productive..
love your talent!u r so very productive..<br />love your talent!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54807286826404580092010-08-13T19:23:51.989-05:002010-08-13T19:23:51.989-05:00Thanks Wayne!
There are some things I am afraid of...Thanks Wayne!<br />There are some things I am afraid of!<br />Pamflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-911923122445269242010-08-13T18:03:49.362-05:002010-08-13T18:03:49.362-05:00nicely afraid......ed....thanks for this Pamnicely afraid......ed....thanks for this PamWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41449506428291393072010-08-12T13:34:09.432-05:002010-08-12T13:34:09.432-05:00Thanks everyone for all the nice comments!
PamelaThanks everyone for all the nice comments!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-13588905960082718202010-08-12T10:56:49.822-05:002010-08-12T10:56:49.822-05:00Great way to do it!
tumbled thoughts in a silver...Great way to do it!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/08/tumbled-thoughts-in-silver-tumbler.html" rel="nofollow">tumbled thoughts in a silver tumbler</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15645351938472809892010-08-12T08:46:42.354-05:002010-08-12T08:46:42.354-05:00ALways have a courage to step up in life! I enjoye...ALways have a courage to step up in life! I enjoyed this poem a lot! <br /><br />Have a wonderful week!<br /><br />Love <br />SunshineSabi Sunshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08178561515468966505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11035011521875185372010-08-12T02:55:49.021-05:002010-08-12T02:55:49.021-05:00It is possible to be brave and smart ;)
i enjoye...It is possible to be brave and smart ;) <br />i enjoyed this, it makes me think of how I talk: make a comment then add the stipulations :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61937253592136621142010-08-11T18:23:13.692-05:002010-08-11T18:23:13.692-05:00I am with Brenda, I like my feet planted firmly on...I am with Brenda, I like my feet planted firmly on the ground. Love your list poem! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65062740749306593582010-08-11T18:16:27.028-05:002010-08-11T18:16:27.028-05:00Nice, Pamela! I like the way you start with hyperb...Nice, Pamela! I like the way you start with hyperbole, qualify it, then admit it's not quite right. So real!Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-29805831325473799462010-08-11T17:10:02.022-05:002010-08-11T17:10:02.022-05:00You can't even get me *on* a high bridge or cl...You can't even get me *on* a high bridge or cliff. Well done, P!Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43187328497867837962010-08-11T16:30:59.980-05:002010-08-11T16:30:59.980-05:00I was struk by the first line "I'm not af...I was struk by the first line "I'm not afraid of amything" as compared to the ending "I'm afraid of some things." Nice writing, Pamela.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44317627522452554242010-08-11T13:12:13.174-05:002010-08-11T13:12:13.174-05:00I have done many things, some that taught me lasti...I have done many things, some that taught me lasting deep rooted lessons, others the lesson that I'll never try that again. I too like the playfulness in your poem, but then it is in play that we learn best. I like the structure of the piece that puts me in mind of a child playing hide and seek, or some other silly go-round. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://intuitivepaths.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48335420412623883802010-08-11T12:57:08.323-05:002010-08-11T12:57:08.323-05:00Great piece, Pamela! The silly go round sums it u...Great piece, Pamela! The silly go round sums it up. I like my feet firmly planted. :)<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30217480365948846632010-08-11T11:37:24.820-05:002010-08-11T11:37:24.820-05:00I feel the same way, especially about bungee jumpi...I feel the same way, especially about bungee jumping! Too dangerous for a brave person like me, LOL. Beautifully written!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39701970174664192372010-08-11T10:31:39.544-05:002010-08-11T10:31:39.544-05:00I like the playfulness of this one, Pamela. Seems...I like the playfulness of this one, Pamela. Seems as though you were thinking out loud. I think the layout lends to that feel wonderfully.<br /><br />- DinaDina Spicehttp://mypoeticlicense.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com