tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2931359028978610570..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: red crevasse big tent poetry #32-referential magazine, borrow an ideaUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41202009988070789262010-12-18T22:11:59.359-06:002010-12-18T22:11:59.359-06:00thank ya nan:)
Pamelathank ya nan:)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68497148151289056872010-12-18T20:05:21.865-06:002010-12-18T20:05:21.865-06:00woo - frightening! Great poem.woo - frightening! Great poem.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-75289827752218664112010-12-13T12:15:29.688-06:002010-12-13T12:15:29.688-06:00Thanks Kelly.
PamelaThanks Kelly.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-69745106734597979672010-12-12T21:33:05.372-06:002010-12-12T21:33:05.372-06:00I like your use of dashes here. Really adds to the...I like your use of dashes here. Really adds to the tension. Nice work.Kellyhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41860368149883868432010-12-11T22:30:59.771-06:002010-12-11T22:30:59.771-06:00Deb thanks for the suggestion and I thought about ...Deb thanks for the suggestion and I thought about using the word crevasse. I am not very good with titles :(<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8618921347138084452010-12-11T20:24:07.169-06:002010-12-11T20:24:07.169-06:00Frightening ride, well written. I'd suggest &q...Frightening ride, well written. I'd suggest "Red Crevasse" for a title, or something like that. :-)Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78319437932942884792010-12-11T12:55:10.776-06:002010-12-11T12:55:10.776-06:00It was Marian.
PamelaIt was Marian.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50549930321099732012010-12-11T12:54:54.069-06:002010-12-11T12:54:54.069-06:00Wayne now I have a terrible fear of heights and pe...Wayne now I have a terrible fear of heights and people who drive fast. Yikes!<br />Cheers to you<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-30473984659528491152010-12-11T12:53:19.112-06:002010-12-11T12:53:19.112-06:00Laurie it was absolutely no fun.
PamelaLaurie it was absolutely no fun.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15786065801098129132010-12-10T20:22:54.961-06:002010-12-10T20:22:54.961-06:00That is scarey!That is scarey!marianvhttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18773586140506588112010-12-10T19:08:10.146-06:002010-12-10T19:08:10.146-06:00fear...who is afraid of fear? ha ha.....anyways ni...fear...who is afraid of fear? ha ha.....anyways nice one Pam...thanks for the readWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-76766807790945580142010-12-10T18:52:36.847-06:002010-12-10T18:52:36.847-06:00I feel your fear... that must have been horrible f...I feel your fear... that must have been horrible for you.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-39630945208341571652010-12-10T16:12:49.493-06:002010-12-10T16:12:49.493-06:00Barb ever since I have an innate fear of heights.
...Barb ever since I have an innate fear of heights.<br />Not something I experienced growing up. I used to love roller coasters and that sort of thing. Now I won't go fast in a car. Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-53635443743281768662010-12-10T16:10:22.110-06:002010-12-10T16:10:22.110-06:00Susan terrifying would be appropriate and quite un...Susan terrifying would be appropriate and quite unsettling. Thanks.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11516888180490396632010-12-10T16:08:52.359-06:002010-12-10T16:08:52.359-06:00Julie yes it was.
PamelaJulie yes it was.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-66951853353999685622010-12-10T15:53:06.072-06:002010-12-10T15:53:06.072-06:00well done
I was hoping it was one of those insane ...well done<br />I was hoping it was one of those insane amusement park events.barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-28892627395136093612010-12-10T14:36:12.287-06:002010-12-10T14:36:12.287-06:00The first line brings my heart to throat and holds...The first line brings my heart to throat and holds it there til the end. Vivid, unsettling and outright frightening. Well done!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-32653421221207406512010-12-10T13:17:03.910-06:002010-12-10T13:17:03.910-06:00Wow. Intense. Scared. Feeling the scared. Feeling ...Wow. Intense. Scared. Feeling the scared. Feeling the disbelief. Wow. Lost. for. Words.Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-77567573380958443752010-12-10T11:36:53.127-06:002010-12-10T11:36:53.127-06:00Robin,
Thanks I appreciate that.
PamelaRobin,<br />Thanks I appreciate that.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-92005563080385666332010-12-10T11:35:43.682-06:002010-12-10T11:35:43.682-06:00Thanks Viv and I won't supply any notes either...Thanks Viv and I won't supply any notes either.<br />Best left to the imagination.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5568387934853815742010-12-10T11:02:11.128-06:002010-12-10T11:02:11.128-06:00Pamela - What Viv said!
That very first line &quo...Pamela - What Viv said!<br /><br />That very first line "suspended upside down / in the crevice of a red mountain" so fine. Pulls us right in.Robinhttp://www.robin-turner.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61598092832494423442010-12-10T08:11:37.912-06:002010-12-10T08:11:37.912-06:00You have painted the event - unspecified - in such...You have painted the event - unspecified - in such language that no notes are needed. Brilliant.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com