tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2651933928032090713..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: laughter comes from ... we write poems #5 Erasures (found poetry) taken from Pointed Roofs by Dorothy Miller RichardsonUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54402552891234585702010-06-10T14:54:48.719-05:002010-06-10T14:54:48.719-05:00Thanks Nicole!
So you saw anger too! Oh no! ;)
Pam...Thanks Nicole!<br />So you saw anger too! Oh no! ;)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62995808537071607482010-06-10T09:36:46.421-05:002010-06-10T09:36:46.421-05:00I pictured a room full of people indulging in the ...I pictured a room full of people indulging in the company of the green fairy. Your final result was very descriptive and full of anger, misery, and drunk. Very well done.Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63590410621659790912010-06-09T20:29:10.711-05:002010-06-09T20:29:10.711-05:00Linda
Thanks for such a nice comment!
PamelaLinda<br />Thanks for such a nice comment!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-57771545249608255112010-06-09T20:18:39.377-05:002010-06-09T20:18:39.377-05:00Woot! I love, "people running melody" Wo...Woot! I love, "people running melody" Wow! This prompt fit you, Pamela. Wonderful the way you ended this, too. Thank you!Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-44195030978790512812010-06-09T15:09:27.917-05:002010-06-09T15:09:27.917-05:00Thanks Dina that is a very nice thing to say!
yes ...Thanks Dina that is a very nice thing to say!<br />yes it does make sense to me but then who knows if that makes sense!;)<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41117069742083850232010-06-09T14:27:12.123-05:002010-06-09T14:27:12.123-05:00It's interesting how we all used the same text...It's interesting how we all used the same text yet we all definitely inserted our own flavor. This was absolutely a "Pamela poem"! I loved how you got you to shine through so well. Does that make sense?!<br /><br />- DinaDina Spicehttp://mypoeticlicense.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-37008938055421402902010-06-09T12:16:50.534-05:002010-06-09T12:16:50.534-05:00Angie
This was a lot of fun!Thanks for a great pro...Angie<br />This was a lot of fun!Thanks for a great prompt!<br />I suppose it does sound like that!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48277872799365417922010-06-09T11:58:31.324-05:002010-06-09T11:58:31.324-05:00wow -- I didn't get anger. I got earthquake or...wow -- I didn't get anger. I got earthquake or fire or some immediately-after-disaster reaction. <br /><br />thanks for playing, Pam!<br />:)angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-1615674871532812472010-06-09T11:11:13.196-05:002010-06-09T11:11:13.196-05:00Thanks Barb and it did turn out sounding a bit ang...Thanks Barb and it did turn out sounding a bit angry.<br />Maybe it is a reflection of my sour mood lately ;)Honestly this is an interesting form of writing poetry though!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65626505361903673572010-06-09T11:07:54.988-05:002010-06-09T11:07:54.988-05:00Thanks for stopping over Footprints!
PamelaThanks for stopping over Footprints!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45656104671837922732010-06-09T11:07:20.896-05:002010-06-09T11:07:20.896-05:00Love chartreuse Derrick!
PamelaLove chartreuse Derrick!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34871220621496885432010-06-09T11:06:29.686-05:002010-06-09T11:06:29.686-05:00Thanks Brenda ;)!
PamelaThanks Brenda ;)!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20969032892137088982010-06-09T11:05:56.769-05:002010-06-09T11:05:56.769-05:00Linda
Thanks and I enjoyed this prompt and this f...Linda <br />Thanks and I enjoyed this prompt and this form of writing very much!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49503157882156712782010-06-09T10:24:29.378-05:002010-06-09T10:24:29.378-05:00You really distilled the text. It seemed very ang...You really distilled the text. It seemed very angry to me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-91392982381049045802010-06-09T09:46:30.699-05:002010-06-09T09:46:30.699-05:00So much energy in this, Pamela! Great word choices...So much energy in this, Pamela! Great word choices!1965 Footprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08640917815632990664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20371233211001450202010-06-09T08:58:27.471-05:002010-06-09T08:58:27.471-05:00Yes, that green chartreuse is strong stuff, Pamela...Yes, that green chartreuse is strong stuff, Pamela!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-78444378340810230732010-06-09T07:29:07.535-05:002010-06-09T07:29:07.535-05:00Love it too, Pamela. Interesting focus on the bot...Love it too, Pamela. Interesting focus on the bottle of Chartreuse and its effect. Well erased! ~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12449781159852802462010-06-09T07:18:29.143-05:002010-06-09T07:18:29.143-05:00This works so well that I wonder if the words eras...This works so well that I wonder if the words erased were truly needed ! Love this : fumbled and slurred soundlesslyLinda Franceshttp://word-painting.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com