tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2471307979521708309..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: "Life in your Room" Poets United Thursday Think Tank #51-chocolateUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16014250076410385352011-08-20T15:46:26.742-05:002011-08-20T15:46:26.742-05:00Great job Pam!
Hope you've been well! I'v...Great job Pam!<br /><br />Hope you've been well! I've missed ya!<br /><br />~alaurileeServing Hugs on a Platter and Tears in a Teacuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03184590044946798156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-12703305640714382812011-06-02T09:48:23.687-05:002011-06-02T09:48:23.687-05:00Life is a lot like chocolate, melting slowly in ou...Life is a lot like chocolate, melting slowly in our hands. You capture the moment with vivid language that slowly melts into the mind. Good one Pamela,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-83554633396841294622011-05-30T21:37:36.914-05:002011-05-30T21:37:36.914-05:00It felt like a dream, wonderful and visually stunn...It felt like a dream, wonderful and visually stunning~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68648978045624869122011-05-29T17:59:29.952-05:002011-05-29T17:59:29.952-05:00Thanks Peggy. Will email you right away. No drug c...Thanks Peggy. Will email you right away. No drug cartels in this area as of yet. Thank goodness.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-4986108549265550512011-05-29T15:30:02.924-05:002011-05-29T15:30:02.924-05:00Looking for a way to e-mail you directly Pamela bu...Looking for a way to e-mail you directly Pamela but will try this. You asked about Guatemala--we LOVED it. We had expected it to be Mexico-South, but it was so distinct. There are of course the drug cartels there now, but you might be familiar with them living in Mexico. We were glad to have out guide and always felt quite safe. He was a marvelous person. I can send you his name and more details about our trip. Peggan@aol.comPeggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90867224540098149652011-05-29T15:06:43.651-05:002011-05-29T15:06:43.651-05:00Thanks Peggy. It has been an inferno here, and bel...Thanks Peggy. It has been an inferno here, and believe that where much of this came from.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-85253617376322523012011-05-28T22:50:01.186-05:002011-05-28T22:50:01.186-05:00I am late with my comment on this very effective s...I am late with my comment on this very effective sleepless hot night poem--chocolate melting and all! Seems to me to show that between sleep and awake state of being--what a relief either sleep or daylight!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-33852022522541903412011-05-27T19:57:17.476-05:002011-05-27T19:57:17.476-05:00Thanks Andy.Thanks Andy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43997605623699238772011-05-27T18:34:42.726-05:002011-05-27T18:34:42.726-05:00Lovely imagery here.
Nicely done!Lovely imagery here.<br /><br />Nicely done!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-43905985680666445172011-05-27T15:34:17.310-05:002011-05-27T15:34:17.310-05:00Thanks Renee, it could describe many a person'...Thanks Renee, it could describe many a person's life. Sad but true.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-18681630465625928492011-05-27T15:09:25.889-05:002011-05-27T15:09:25.889-05:00A bit haunting but probably so reminiscent of so m...A bit haunting but probably so reminiscent of so many lives and you bring me there into this one. Nicely done!Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17540515627907661622011-05-27T12:01:41.372-05:002011-05-27T12:01:41.372-05:00Thanks Sherry.Thanks Sherry.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-68303314303791083382011-05-27T12:01:20.973-05:002011-05-27T12:01:20.973-05:00Thanks very much, Kaykuala.Thanks very much, Kaykuala.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-88631696607720516832011-05-27T12:00:42.267-05:002011-05-27T12:00:42.267-05:00Thanks Judith.Thanks Judith.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16125221270877628492011-05-27T11:18:19.941-05:002011-05-27T11:18:19.941-05:00So so beautiful. I love the wonderfully rich image...So so beautiful. I love the wonderfully rich images. You put me right there.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5455384793847368752011-05-27T10:35:07.004-05:002011-05-27T10:35:07.004-05:00Pam,
Just as you had replied to Mary, I often do t...Pam,<br />Just as you had replied to Mary, I often do the same. I just sort of dream around some lines and then where it is convenient later, relate it to a prompt following some minor changes. Yours turned out beautifully!kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-20953908791067969742011-05-26T22:34:09.886-05:002011-05-26T22:34:09.886-05:00What a lovely, dreamy poem. beautiful use of this ...What a lovely, dreamy poem. beautiful use of this prompt.Judith C Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09900422363643962837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64612175043628889232011-05-26T21:31:35.852-05:002011-05-26T21:31:35.852-05:00Thanks Shay, I am glad it had that effect.Thanks Shay, I am glad it had that effect.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48923736332515991292011-05-26T21:28:47.164-05:002011-05-26T21:28:47.164-05:00Thanks thingy.Thanks thingy.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34212875527964503462011-05-26T19:02:49.715-05:002011-05-26T19:02:49.715-05:00this is haunting. it's beautiful and melanchol...this is haunting. it's beautiful and melancholy.<br /><br />(it's Fireblossom...Blogger isn't letting me comment sometimes, lately)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8224032772591343012011-05-26T18:12:46.545-05:002011-05-26T18:12:46.545-05:00Oh, this was fabulous. : )Oh, this was fabulous. : )Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-73603943308345279372011-05-26T17:21:05.248-05:002011-05-26T17:21:05.248-05:00I had a southern cityscape in mind for this, Dick....I had a southern cityscape in mind for this, Dick. Hot, sticky, humid night with no where to go, and you can't sleep. I am glad it was effective. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-40625525589199795862011-05-26T17:17:54.326-05:002011-05-26T17:17:54.326-05:00Mary, I started this yesterday, and I wasn't s...Mary, I started this yesterday, and I wasn't sure where I was going with it. Then I saw the "chocolate" prompt, and changed a few lines. This is the end result.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21836839051889400672011-05-26T17:14:49.238-05:002011-05-26T17:14:49.238-05:00Thanks for the visit butterflies!Thanks for the visit butterflies!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-65262924412395965792011-05-26T17:06:11.713-05:002011-05-26T17:06:11.713-05:00There's a powerful sense of insomniac claustro...There's a powerful sense of insomniac claustrophobia to this intense poem. Disturbing and highly effective.Dick Joneshttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.com