tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2429745368904199854..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: A Red Dress and High Heels #52=We Write Poems-LimitsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-34196873136586532502011-05-05T17:26:16.013-05:002011-05-05T17:26:16.013-05:00This is really first class writing, Pamela, and re...This is really first class writing, Pamela, and reminds us of the immensity of everything and, also, its small poignancies. I especially loved the lines about the stars helping us to wish for something immense. I agree they could stand alone as the most profoundly beautiful haiku. Just beautiful.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-45888182973844772802011-05-05T15:51:29.684-05:002011-05-05T15:51:29.684-05:00Thanks to all for the very nice comments.Thanks to all for the very nice comments.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67590326960237918932011-05-04T20:26:01.182-05:002011-05-04T20:26:01.182-05:00Pamela, I like the second stanza, how it is about ...Pamela, I like the second stanza, how it is about life, the first word of your poem. And I like the repetition of aligned - it struck me right away: "to move perimeters / so they aligned in the mind" and then later with the stars. Geometry and astronomy - the world connecting with the cosmos - and how we're aligned - and then back to reality with the red dress. It's lovely. Thanks.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-16043060187031302202011-05-04T08:39:29.908-05:002011-05-04T08:39:29.908-05:00Wonderful how you took us all the way to the stars...Wonderful how you took us all the way to the stars, then brought us back to that single bud and the little red dress. Your last stanza is poignant and so relatable. Thank you, Pamela. You continue to impress,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-61553031276886130272011-05-04T08:10:27.971-05:002011-05-04T08:10:27.971-05:00Pamela, This is quite lovely. The second stanza hi...Pamela, This is quite lovely. The second stanza hit home with me. Been there. <br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26164950202460106412011-05-04T07:42:47.375-05:002011-05-04T07:42:47.375-05:00Yes, I feel I hold my breath, my eyes finish the p...Yes, I feel I hold my breath, my eyes finish the poem. I like it very much.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-48442055688312433152011-05-04T07:04:26.949-05:002011-05-04T07:04:26.949-05:00Whimsical, Pamela. Mine's a purple dress.Whimsical, Pamela. Mine's a purple dress.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-9366457629751370382011-05-04T06:46:22.376-05:002011-05-04T06:46:22.376-05:00"I should’ve worn the red dress; then
I would..."I should’ve worn the red dress; then<br />I would remember what I’ve forgotten … or<br />entwine it away forever." What gorgeous words, Pamela!Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-46281005534392765852011-05-04T06:45:20.389-05:002011-05-04T06:45:20.389-05:00Pamela,
Love the starry words you have written.
I ...Pamela,<br />Love the starry words you have written.<br />I am especially drawn to that red dress. Life cannot get any better, than a little red dress!!!!<br /><br />Good to find you again Pamela.Missed your words recently....<br />Best wishes, EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-51175931479269298372011-05-04T06:32:51.797-05:002011-05-04T06:32:51.797-05:00Love this and the descriptions. All things that c...Love this and the descriptions. All things that can bring us more fully alive are wonderful things. I'll wear my red dress now. <br /><br />http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/05/demon-birds.htmlJudy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-54559973610318654182011-05-04T05:13:09.327-05:002011-05-04T05:13:09.327-05:00We're always learning, and experience teaches ...We're always learning, and experience teaches us our capacity to learn is limitless.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15672540910984583342011-05-04T04:48:25.936-05:002011-05-04T04:48:25.936-05:00Oh I love the way you use the stars for your purpo...Oh I love the way you use the stars for your purpose in the 3rd stanza.M. A. S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04050723085916361298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64594248772068015972011-05-04T04:41:21.684-05:002011-05-04T04:41:21.684-05:00seeing bulbs pushing through with new shoots
heart...seeing bulbs pushing through with new shoots<br />hearteninglucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-24541894645007986372011-05-04T04:35:36.772-05:002011-05-04T04:35:36.772-05:00I especially like your second stanza, Pam. I have...I especially like your second stanza, Pam. I have sometimes felt the same way!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-462786555001096872011-05-04T04:04:34.937-05:002011-05-04T04:04:34.937-05:00I like how it comes together in that last stanza.I like how it comes together in that last stanza.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-84995360845163691592011-05-04T03:59:52.710-05:002011-05-04T03:59:52.710-05:00Stars are merely aligned against
the sky for gazin...Stars are merely aligned against<br />the sky for gazing … <br />So we may wish for something immense<br /><br />A poem in its own right. Wonderful.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.com