tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post2016337134108832652..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: A Mystery on the Coastal Waterway poetry tow truck #6-lean on me/sunday scribblings #253-storyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-81793192499499456692011-02-08T13:20:18.909-06:002011-02-08T13:20:18.909-06:00Donna, thanks for the prompt:)Donna, thanks for the prompt:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-75756923444567074592011-02-08T13:19:43.778-06:002011-02-08T13:19:43.778-06:00Thanks Jingle!Thanks Jingle!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-33884479100125591702011-02-08T13:19:16.643-06:002011-02-08T13:19:16.643-06:00I think I will work on that, jaerose.I think I will work on that, jaerose.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-35333702493939150262011-02-08T13:18:38.176-06:002011-02-08T13:18:38.176-06:00Glad you did Anthony.Glad you did Anthony.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-60196091683318928972011-02-08T13:18:12.901-06:002011-02-08T13:18:12.901-06:00Oldegg thanks, but it is drafty.Oldegg thanks, but it is drafty.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-72783200700962753822011-02-08T13:17:38.191-06:002011-02-08T13:17:38.191-06:00You should try it Abigail.
It has some interesting...You should try it Abigail.<br />It has some interesting results.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-17249855207751521592011-02-07T14:56:49.759-06:002011-02-07T14:56:49.759-06:00complex story in simple form,
well done.complex story in simple form,<br />well done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11878177720691602132011-02-07T05:30:40.976-06:002011-02-07T05:30:40.976-06:00Oh yes, I could feel all those voices mixing up an...Oh yes, I could feel all those voices mixing up and becoming your story to tell..and I definitely want to hear more about the 'dark-haired girl who drank from five silver chalices'..that is such a tantalising thought..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-36403573296975708142011-02-07T03:16:34.567-06:002011-02-07T03:16:34.567-06:00That was cleverly done. Enjoyed it.That was cleverly done. Enjoyed it.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19706639549106623082011-02-06T19:37:15.536-06:002011-02-06T19:37:15.536-06:00Great draft - and great titles! Glad you gave it a...Great draft - and great titles! Glad you gave it a try.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11647002934602811642011-02-06T19:32:32.209-06:002011-02-06T19:32:32.209-06:00You have just put a food processor in my brain!
Y...You have just put a food processor in my brain!<br /><br />You say it is a very drafty poem; it certainly put the wind up me!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-8114889088019580012011-02-06T17:21:21.420-06:002011-02-06T17:21:21.420-06:00I enjoyed it...never seen this concept used in a p...I enjoyed it...never seen this concept used in a poem before!<br />I may have to try it myself :)Abigail Buntinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14993797228034911245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-5726906461716327632011-02-06T15:41:37.309-06:002011-02-06T15:41:37.309-06:00RJ a mash-up it is, lol!
It does need some work:)
...RJ a mash-up it is, lol!<br />It does need some work:)<br />Thanks girl!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63969972440886189272011-02-06T15:31:32.971-06:002011-02-06T15:31:32.971-06:00That was one of the best mash-ups I ever read! Co...That was one of the best mash-ups I ever read! Cool!RJ Clarkenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.com