tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post1008881799928370680..comments2023-08-07T06:47:28.676-06:00Comments on Poetry with me ...: Awaiting Your Song NaPoWriMo #23-Syllabic 1-12-1Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50511066974893955472011-04-25T11:51:33.270-05:002011-04-25T11:51:33.270-05:00Elizabeth, I am happy with the results, maybe I am...Elizabeth, I am happy with the results, maybe I am starting to get a bit bleary-eyed from posting a poem a day. I'll do one again sometime in the future. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-23804835747125198942011-04-25T00:07:38.694-05:002011-04-25T00:07:38.694-05:00Glad to hear it, Anthony, you live in a cold part ...Glad to hear it, Anthony, you live in a cold part of the world.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11643309948391778102011-04-24T23:28:50.900-05:002011-04-24T23:28:50.900-05:00Ah, I was sorry when you said you wouldn't be ...Ah, I was sorry when you said you wouldn't be doing this again. It reads much like a soft sung melody and as usual, your use of language makes it vivd and evocative. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-21895564198696673792011-04-24T12:49:31.005-05:002011-04-24T12:49:31.005-05:00Amanda, do you live in a cold part of the country?...Amanda, do you live in a cold part of the country?<br />Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-50469107724200385442011-04-24T12:48:41.579-05:002011-04-24T12:48:41.579-05:00Tilly, it is not a form, I will be doing again soo...Tilly, it is not a form, I will be doing again soon.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-26233413389589583252011-04-24T12:47:03.038-05:002011-04-24T12:47:03.038-05:00Thank you, Brian. I'll be back to one stop aft...Thank you, Brian. I'll be back to one stop after the April madness.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-67959063547737480452011-04-24T12:46:00.222-05:002011-04-24T12:46:00.222-05:00Thanks Mr. Walker.Thanks Mr. Walker.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-70537576788980201472011-04-24T12:45:29.398-05:002011-04-24T12:45:29.398-05:00The same to you Carrie, and thanks:)The same to you Carrie, and thanks:)flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-90358163504512867542011-04-24T12:44:43.951-05:002011-04-24T12:44:43.951-05:00Thanks Mary, as I said it was a bit of a bugger to...Thanks Mary, as I said it was a bit of a bugger to work with.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-11756936665308987182011-04-24T12:43:59.006-05:002011-04-24T12:43:59.006-05:00You're welcome, Marianne.You're welcome, Marianne.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-41394980184884470632011-04-24T12:43:14.129-05:002011-04-24T12:43:14.129-05:00Brenda, I do like the results, but it was a bit of...Brenda, I do like the results, but it was a bit of a pain making it cohesive. This is from a poem I wrote a couple of weeks ago.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-15485459477367305402011-04-24T12:41:38.906-05:002011-04-24T12:41:38.906-05:00Jinksy, I love your etheree and the artwork.Jinksy, I love your etheree and the artwork.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58241396142017406372011-04-24T12:39:52.778-05:002011-04-24T12:39:52.778-05:00This poem was a real bugger to write, Dave. Thanks...This poem was a real bugger to write, Dave. Thanks.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-62208154559581956902011-04-24T12:39:05.780-05:002011-04-24T12:39:05.780-05:00Actually that song was going through my head, whil...Actually that song was going through my head, while writing this, Ron.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-63952356608043002272011-04-24T12:37:13.831-05:002011-04-24T12:37:13.831-05:00Thanks Stan, I have had blackbirds on my mind rece...Thanks Stan, I have had blackbirds on my mind recently.flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64622452609069692992011-04-23T20:42:23.957-05:002011-04-23T20:42:23.957-05:00it is a shame if we don't warm up and see some...it is a shame if we don't warm up and see some sun Merula may never fly back! This is so soft and sweet I could almost hear it being whispered.Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-14478221477492310012011-04-23T18:12:14.602-05:002011-04-23T18:12:14.602-05:00I like the form. It's difficult to write to a...I like the form. It's difficult to write to a syllable count and still make sense (and good poetry).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-74736860853043123152011-04-23T16:30:13.362-05:002011-04-23T16:30:13.362-05:00yes i think she sees and hears you as you sing the...yes i think she sees and hears you as you sing these words onto page...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-58390180304682899862011-04-23T12:02:40.567-05:002011-04-23T12:02:40.567-05:00Pamela, it just flows so well - a great blending o...Pamela, it just flows so well - a great blending of words and form - and I like the message of your poem too. I really like that question at the end and "as I / wait".Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-804902053693968402011-04-23T11:23:23.749-05:002011-04-23T11:23:23.749-05:00Pamela your poem is like a song in itself....natur...Pamela your poem is like a song in itself....nature and it's beautiful birds are such a wonderful inspiration. Hope you are doing well, and that you have a lovely Easter weekend! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-52346306775588802212011-04-23T09:00:50.458-05:002011-04-23T09:00:50.458-05:00Such a beautifully gentle poem of nature appreciat...Such a beautifully gentle poem of nature appreciation, Pamela. I agree with Dave that the form really works!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-64653172093226335372011-04-23T07:44:48.888-05:002011-04-23T07:44:48.888-05:00I love your use of 'Turdus Merula.' I had ...I love your use of 'Turdus Merula.' I had to google to know what it was :) This is an interesting form and you have crafted your Syllabic Poem beautifully! I will try it soon. Thank you for the inspiration.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-19203405386939226762011-04-23T07:06:04.921-05:002011-04-23T07:06:04.921-05:00What an interesting form, Pamela. You rock it in ...What an interesting form, Pamela. You rock it in this piece! I'm spending three hours in a car with teenagers, my husband and dogs today. We're driving to my folks' place in the mountains. I may work on one of these during the journey. <br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-49176451700185701802011-04-23T06:46:01.994-05:002011-04-23T06:46:01.994-05:00Syllable counting vibes must have flown from you t...Syllable counting vibes must have flown from you to me this morning, but your words carry beauty...and song. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5898489019646958343.post-47942134312461286572011-04-23T04:50:00.056-05:002011-04-23T04:50:00.056-05:00I don't always find that shape poems work well...I don't always find that shape poems work well. This one does, one of your best, I think.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.com